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Bikes

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 6:40 pm
by Frankenstein
Took this shot a couple of weeks ago in the city - was playing around in PS today and had a fiddle with the image to see if I could improve it somehow - not sure if I succeded.

Image

Frank

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 6:49 pm
by dhess
I like the composition and thinks it works well in black and white.

Can you post the original?

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 7:05 pm
by Frankenstein
dhess wrote:I like the composition and thinks it works well in black and white.

Can you post the original?


Thanks for you comments. Here's the original, straight out of the camera - no sharpening, levels etc (quite bland when you look at it!)

Image

Frank

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 7:28 pm
by dhess
Seeing the original makes your photoshoping seem even more impressive.

Not too many people seem to have the ability to select what to photoshop.

Well done.

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 7:40 pm
by PiroStitch
I like the b&w version :) It actually makes it look a little CG and sci-fi with the smooth surfaces.

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 7:49 pm
by Raydar
Love the B&W version mate!!! :shock:

It would go well in an add campaign….:roll:

Cheers
Ray :wink:

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 7:52 pm
by dhess
I don't know why but it kind of has the same feel as the movie Gataca.

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 8:03 pm
by Catcha
Nice b/w the contrast seem to be a bit soft in the picture. If both colours were abit stronger. I would say that would be a winning shot

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 8:09 pm
by Frankenstein
Catcha wrote:Nice b/w the contrast seem to be a bit soft in the picture. If both colours were abit stronger. I would say that would be a winning shot


Thanks for your comment. I tried stronger sharpening, but it seemed to make it too punchy. Yes, it's slightly soft, but I think it works with this shot.

Frank

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 8:11 pm
by Catcha
Frankenstein wrote:
Catcha wrote:Nice b/w the contrast seem to be a bit soft in the picture. If both colours were abit stronger. I would say that would be a winning shot


Thanks for your comment. I tried stronger sharpening, but it seemed to make it too punchy. Yes, it's slightly soft, but I think it works with this shot.

Frank


It looks like one of those pictures you would buy from a picture shop :D

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 8:16 pm
by Alex
Frank,

Great shot and PPing! Some parts are a bit too dark on my monitor but this actually adds character, I believe.

Alex

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 9:37 pm
by mudder
Excellent PP work, I admire your ability to see what you've ended up with in the original image.

Only being a fussy so-and-so, but I'd clone out the remnants of what appears to be a road line in the B&W one under the moped on the right, takes me away from the terrific end results of the bikes in shadow...

I reckon framed that would sell in a bike shop, coffee shop etc. Good PP.

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 9:39 pm
by Frankenstein
Thanks Mudder. I did see the white lines and wondered if I should remove them, but I deliberatley left them in - I think it gives a touch of reality and depth to the shot.

Frank