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Tortured metal

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 6:46 pm
by dhess
Another macro pic (sigma 150) of an interesting machined metal fence near my place.

Any comments, suggestions?

Image

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 7:57 pm
by the foto fanatic
Hi Dom
While the pic shows off the capabilities of your Sigma, I think the subject matter doesn't really have a lot of impact for the viewer.
Maybe some side-lighting would emphasise the surface irregularities.

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 8:00 pm
by Catcha
Nice close up, shouldn't of disclosed the subject title :D That would of kept me guessing what the picture was of for a while

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 8:06 pm
by dhess
cricketfan wrote:Hi Dom
While the pic shows off the capabilities of your Sigma, I think the subject matter doesn't really have a lot of impact for the viewer.
Maybe some side-lighting would emphasise the surface irregularities.


Thanks for the comments guys.

What exactly do you mean by side lighting? Would and SB800 in remote mode from the side work?

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 8:16 pm
by the foto fanatic
dhess wrote:What exactly do you mean by side lighting? Would and SB800 in remote mode from the side work?


Yes, or using a reflector to reflect sunlight, or even waiting for the sun itself to provide the light like in your "nuts' photo.

PostPosted: Sun May 29, 2005 9:31 pm
by mudder
Wow, the detail in this is amazing, dunno about the subject but wow, the detail...

PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 12:11 am
by Nnnnsic
It looks more like you're shooting for a texture map.

Aside from that, I can't see it as all that inviting for a person to look at.

I also think it could do from being a tad brighter.

PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 12:31 am
by sirhc55
Just watching Aliens - I now know what has eaten that metal :lol:

PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 2:35 am
by Hutchy
Nice pic dhess.

I can see you're aiming for the minimalist in your macro work and you've chosen a great subject. Most macro shots are of plants, flowers and bugs etc. so it's great to see a shot that's challenging the norm while also challenging the viewer's understanding and perception.

PostPosted: Mon May 30, 2005 11:42 am
by dhess
Thankyou for all of the comemnts.

I know its not the most interesting subject matter but like Hutchy said I am a minimaliist when it comes to macro.

I have tried making it brighter but its very easy to blow the highlights. I will try reshooting in different light if I have some time.