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Airborne

Postby ozimax on Fri Jun 03, 2005 7:25 pm

Caught these today down at Park Beach on the way home.


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Postby BBJ on Fri Jun 03, 2005 7:30 pm

Hey Max, 1st out of focus a bit, 2nd 1 clone that dust bunnie out and 3rd rally cool.
Other than that mate looks ok to me, like that #2 and #3, wish i had something ineteresting to take pics of on the way home from work but well i only a few minutes away around the corner.LOL When i work that is.
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Postby ozimax on Fri Jun 03, 2005 7:50 pm

Yeah John, you're right, first two bit out of focus, they were literally snap shots with a fully extended 300mm slow lens so the best I could do! Will have to clean up that dust spot, not sure if on lens or CCD? Max
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Postby Matt. K on Fri Jun 03, 2005 9:11 pm

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Enjoy looking at your images. Keep them coming. :lol:
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Postby Alex on Fri Jun 03, 2005 11:15 pm

Max,

No.3 is really fantastic.

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Postby mic on Fri Jun 03, 2005 11:43 pm

Maxie, the middle gull is great against the deep blue, minus the bunny of course.

Is that last bird trying to fly and has he got any undies on :roll: :roll:
These surfer dudes need to think about these things when there is stalking sufer photographer dudes hanging around with big long Nikkon glass :lol: :lol:

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Postby ozimax on Fri Jun 03, 2005 11:47 pm

UNfortunately Mic only Tamron glass, if Birdie is listening and wants a test pilot for a Nikkor 600mm I would be happy to help out! :D :D
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Jun 04, 2005 12:46 am

Max - the last shot is great and I even thought that you may have used flash :o

Your avatar is great - one of the classic clowns :lol:
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Postby ozimax on Sat Jun 04, 2005 10:24 am

Chris, the light was perfect yesterday, but only for about 10 minutes, then it gets too dark.

I think you're right, Harpo was very funny but my favourite was Chico and his piano playing, especially when he played the piano with a piece of fruit!

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Postby KerryPierce on Sat Jun 04, 2005 10:38 am

That 3rd shot is very cool, Max. :D

Don't get rid of the dust bunnie, they're nice conversation pieces, especially if they're in focus. :shock: :lol:
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Postby BBJ on Sat Jun 04, 2005 11:00 am

Yeh i think Max you did a good job, and i know it is hard and i too have a problem i think og hitting the shutter button to early at times instead of waiting to focus. This may not be the problem but seem to be one i have at times, something have to start to get out of the habit.LOL But i love your surf shots.
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Postby ozimax on Sat Jun 04, 2005 11:25 am

Yeah John, I think it is hard to get the timing right, thankfully the D70 multiple shot function works pretty well and rescues some situations. Oftentimes I see a great aerial manouvre and then 'click', its too late! We'll keep trying!

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