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Landscape shot... opinions please.

PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 6:20 pm
by owen
Image

Comments welcome.

PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 6:40 pm
by dooda
Clone out all of those lights on the horizon they burt the eyes.

I can see what you were doing in terms of the foreground but it looks a little bit cluttered. I think that something a little more simple in terms of shape would be easier to digest.

The only other thing that I would suggest is taking the picture with more light on the scene. It is all shady and lacks the golden glow of the sun. I like that you are including foreground interest though.

PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 7:50 pm
by mudder
G'day,
I like the framing and the foreground and agree with Dooda, there seems as there's almost too many items in the middleground, I'd clone out the top left traffic light and post, maybe a play with levels for the sky area in PP a bit?

Good interesting viewpoint and nicely framed...

PostPosted: Sat Jun 11, 2005 8:17 pm
by meicw
Hi. I agree, those 2 lights in the background are distracting. And I would crop the shot below the brown coloured rock to remove it and the foreground.

Regardsd
Meicw