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Postby kingsley on Mon Jun 20, 2005 10:41 pm

Untill I'm able to buy a wide angle I'm using Pano stitching in PS

This is my first post.What do you think,not sure about the trees either side
all comments welcome

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Postby yeocsa on Mon Jun 20, 2005 11:14 pm

Hi kingsley,

It is an excellent shot. The trees at both end serves as a frame within frame, providing balance. If there's only 1 tree, the balance would be offest. Would be better if you could include the whole tree on the right.

Well done,

regards,

Arthur
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Postby mudder on Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:28 am

G'day,
Don't think a wide angle will give you something this wide :lol: but the pano is great. I like the trees on either side, seems to keep my attention within the central subject area. Looks well stitched too, can't see any joins, how many images?

Out of curiosity, wonder if it's worth selecting the foliage areas of the trees and maybe lightening them up a bit in brightness/contrast/sat maybe? Just ramblings :)

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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jun 21, 2005 11:21 am

Kingsley. Well done. This looks a little dark on my monitor, but the composition works very well - although the trees on the left both look like they are either an artifact of barrell distortion (unlikely) or ready to topple over :wink:
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