Reflections on sail power

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Reflections on sail power

Postby Willy wombat on Mon Jul 11, 2005 11:43 pm

Some more shots from the harbor. This time a little later in the day.

Enjoy and comment if you would like.

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Postby PiroStitch on Mon Jul 11, 2005 11:55 pm

Shiver me timbers laddie, that's a might big...errrr...what a mighty fine piece of wood thar :twisted:

Great pics Willy. I love the perspective of the first pic. The colours and detail are great! Only critique would be the seagull (clone it out) and the white part of the timber (i can't remember the name for that part of the boat) is a bit out of focus.
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:10 am

PiroStitch wrote:Shiver me timbers laddie, that's a might big...errrr...what a mighty fine piece of wood thar :twisted:

Great pics Willy. I love the perspective of the first pic. The colours and detail are great! Only critique would be the seagull (clone it out) and the white part of the timber (i can't remember the name for that part of the boat) is a bit out of focus.


So the seagul doesnt work. I was wondering about that. What do you think about the B&W. Ye arrrgh - she be ye olde sailing ship.
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:11 am

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I agree with all that Piro said and I think the colour dumps on the B & W (sorry) basically because the B & W lacks contrast and so has less punch.
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Postby PiroStitch on Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:14 am

Yeah sorry mate, the b&w doesn't do it for me. Might be because of the tighter crop and what stubbsy mentioned about the lack of punch.
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:16 am

PiroStitch wrote:Yeah sorry mate, the b&w doesn't do it for me. Might be because of the tighter crop and what stubbsy mentioned about the lack of punch.


Anyone got a good tute on converting images from colour to B&W. Is there more to it than desaturating and increasing contrast slider? Please help!
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:28 am

Willy wombat wrote:
PiroStitch wrote:Yeah sorry mate, the b&w doesn't do it for me. Might be because of the tighter crop and what stubbsy mentioned about the lack of punch.


Anyone got a good tute on converting images from colour to B&W. Is there more to it than desaturating and increasing contrast slider? Please help!

Willy

There's a lot more to it than that. There are a number of techniques.

Here are three:

The Greg Gorman way
Using the colour channels
using hue & saturation
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:34 am

I am such a gumby!

OK - i have some reading to do. No more dodgy B&W from me for at least a week. Hopefully i can take all that techo stuff in and come back with something better.

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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:35 am

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I found the Greg Gorman one the best when I first started.
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Postby robboh on Tue Jul 12, 2005 1:57 pm

The first one works best for me and is a very nice pic! Love the colour graduation from the deepblue in the sky down to the lighter horizon/water and then back down to almost black in the water at the bottom.

I think the bird would have worked with the whole bird in the frame, or if it had more 'space', but as it is, kill da boid :)

The 'white bit of wood at the pointy end' is called a bowsprit.
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Postby BBJ on Tue Jul 12, 2005 2:15 pm

Hi Willy, I am with the others i like the colour pics more than the B&W, but goos shots, reflections of the water it good.
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Postby MHD on Tue Jul 12, 2005 2:17 pm

yes the first one in colour is a brilliant powerfull image!
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