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A taste of honey

Postby rokkstar on Thu Jul 14, 2005 11:54 am

Hi guys,

A couple more Old favourites, just experimenting with light.

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Postby Nnnnsic on Thu Jul 14, 2005 12:03 pm

I think the first one works the best.
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Postby Oneputt on Thu Jul 14, 2005 12:10 pm

For me the second, but with a closer crop, bottom and top.
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Postby wendellt on Thu Jul 14, 2005 12:10 pm

Very conceptual MAtt, keep it up!
2nd one works best
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Postby MATT on Thu Jul 14, 2005 12:16 pm

Nice....

But you spilt some err... Honey :lol: onit.

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Postby MHD on Thu Jul 14, 2005 12:23 pm

Very cool! A great experiment!
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Postby rokkstar on Thu Jul 14, 2005 12:39 pm

Thanks for your comments guys.
I wasn't sure which one I prefered. The burnt out highlights in the second one detract for me slightly but I like the 3 drops as opposed to the one in the first.
Loving this still life experimenting. I mean I should be working but..... :roll:
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Postby stormygirl on Thu Jul 14, 2005 12:58 pm

Excellent!

The 2nd one works for me too, and I'd also agree with Oneputt on a tighter crop.

Brilliant! One day I will get around to experimenting myself!
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Jul 14, 2005 1:17 pm

To me #1 is cleaner and more meaningful in the context of what the pic means :wink:
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Postby Hlop on Thu Jul 14, 2005 1:21 pm

#1 works for me :) Great shots!
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Postby Geoff on Thu Jul 14, 2005 1:29 pm

Great work Matt - is this the work of the 50mm 1.4? :)
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Postby rokkstar on Thu Jul 14, 2005 1:40 pm

Geoff wrote:Great work Matt - is this the work of the 50mm 1.4? :)


Actually these were taken with the kit lens. Never ceases to surprise me - totally competant isnt it.
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Postby Geoff on Thu Jul 14, 2005 3:21 pm

rokkstar wrote:
Geoff wrote:Great work Matt - is this the work of the 50mm 1.4? :)


Actually these were taken with the kit lens. Never ceases to surprise me - totally competant isnt it.


That's fantastic Matt. Not only is it the lens, but the master behind it! :)
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