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Posted: **Fri Aug 05, 2005 12:44 pm**

My attempt at Architecture. D2H and 18 - 70mm.

Went for a break at Daylesford.

regards,

Arthur

Posted: **Sat Aug 06, 2005 8:20 pm**

Sorry arthur, it doesnt do it for me. Nothing in the shot truely stands out. :cry:

Posted: **Sat Aug 06, 2005 8:44 pm**

G'day Arthur,

It's a very sharp photo but I have to agree with Nito in that nothing really stands out in the composition.

I may work if it was composed of a 'vertical' section of the building, that is, a vertical shot of one of the doors and arch below from a little further away. (Not sure if I've described it correctly.) Maybe aim for a symetrical photo?

However, I do think the focus and DOF in the photo is really great, very sharp.

Cheers,
Ray

Posted: **Sun Aug 07, 2005 7:20 pm**

For me, two things detract from the photo.

1. The sky

2. The horrizontals are not horrizontal.

Its a fine building, with some interesting features, but I also have the problem of no 'one thing' standing out in the composition.

I hope those comments are helpful.

Cheers
WW

Posted: **Sun Aug 07, 2005 7:23 pm**

Arthur - clone in a sky and you will complete a very nice pic :wink:

Posted: **Sun Aug 07, 2005 9:38 pm**

Hi Arthur,
My instictive reaction was to click on the picture to see the rest of it... Not a technical comment, just feedback I suppose.
Cheers,
Gerard

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