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Postby zeb00 on Sat Aug 13, 2005 7:24 pm

I would love some feed back on what you guys think of this photo
http://www.kpalbum.com/image.php?id=486

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Postby gstark on Sat Aug 13, 2005 8:17 pm

This looks to me as if it should be in the image critiques section.

Thusly moved.
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Postby zeb00 on Sun Aug 14, 2005 4:03 am

oops is right then
shouldnt post as i am running out the door.
where did i post it?
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Postby Marvin on Sun Aug 14, 2005 2:29 pm

I like it because it tells a little story. I find it hard to look at however as it has so much out of focus in it. The hand is very cute.
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Postby gstark on Sun Aug 14, 2005 3:15 pm

zeb00 wrote:oops is right then
shouldnt post as i am running out the door.
where did i post it?


Important links, IIRC.

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Postby mudder on Sun Aug 14, 2005 10:12 pm

I like it but think the hand needs to be sharper to focus on. Good catch though, tells a homely story :)
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Postby redline on Sun Aug 14, 2005 10:28 pm

i reckon you need more of a right angle to rid your self the bg
plus more hand wouldn't hurt it a bit too small.
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