more lens lust with a hint of d2x lust thrown in

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more lens lust with a hint of d2x lust thrown in

Postby avkomp on Tue Aug 16, 2005 11:59 pm

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have seen lots of pix of these black shouldered kites but up until today I hadnt managed to even see one for real. They have amazing eyes

This one was 20 or more metres away and only filled about 1/16th of the frame but I am happy now cos I have seen one.

Now all I need to do is get some better shots of them....


lens lust developing, not to mention d2x lust
comments from the resident birdmen and others appreciated
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Postby Onyx on Wed Aug 17, 2005 2:18 am

Sorry to be harsh, I think it's overexposed. The bird's forehead and face has blown white patches, not to mention the aqua sky - a telltale sign that the blue channel's clipped.

Nice composition though. The blood red eyes are definitely unique.
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Postby birddog114 on Wed Aug 17, 2005 7:47 am

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We live and we always have a dream don't we? you'll get there one day near :wink:
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Postby avkomp on Wed Aug 17, 2005 11:41 am

is very sad that I only noticed the blown forehead after someone pointed it out to me, but I was sure it wasnt that bad initially.
I went back to the original image and it wasnt quite that bad.
Reposted without autolevels on photoshop.
Tad darker overall.
Think I liked the other image slightly better(except for the blown forehead of course
original was shot at +1ev but +.3 or +.6 may have been better??
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Postby Nikon boy on Wed Aug 17, 2005 4:25 pm

I thought it was a good enough pic ,i would just have cropped out the pole a little more as i feel it is a bit distracting, keep trying , as Kipper will tell you they aint easy suckers to photograph well, the great bird guys spend weeks to get a worldbeating pic
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Postby avkomp on Wed Aug 17, 2005 4:59 pm

reposted again slightly increased cropping.
Actually meant to do this earlier but is kinda one of those days.
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