story bridge night shoot

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story bridge night shoot

Postby vrboy on Tue Aug 16, 2005 7:40 pm

Hi all,
heres a quick throw together pan of the brisbane story bridge, I still have some work to do on the sky
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Postby waspo on Tue Aug 16, 2005 8:04 pm

Man, thats sweet! What was your technique/settings etc to do the pano?
Cheers, Jase :D
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Postby mitedo on Tue Aug 16, 2005 8:16 pm

Great shot Vrboy you must print it & hang it on you wall :D
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Postby mudder on Tue Aug 16, 2005 8:22 pm

G'day,
That's a terrific pano, well done, the exposure would have been tricky... Only comment is re: something encroaching on the right hand side of the frame, not sure what it is.
I'd also be tempted to crop some off the top to focus and keep your viewer on the bridge and skyline, and not wander off into the sky.

I'm a sucker for a nice pano, and this is terrific... :)
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Postby Matt. K on Tue Aug 16, 2005 8:38 pm

Vrboy
Very very nice...but maybe try this...open in Photoshop and go to variations. Click on the cyan box 2 times and the blue box once. It takes out most of the brown and looks cooler to my eyes. This is only refining the image to my taste. If you think it looks better the way it is then that's also fine. The image still rocks!
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Aug 16, 2005 11:14 pm

Sweet pic
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Postby vrboy on Tue Aug 16, 2005 11:45 pm

Man, thats sweet! What was your technique/settings etc to do the pano?
Cheers, Jase

It was really hard, there was a high fence , a storm was coming and nowhere to sit a tripod , I folded the legs of tripod held it firm against the fence with one hand above my head and basically guessed my overlaps, no pano head or click stops and with the other hand shot blind on about four second exposures.
That's a terrific pano, well done, the exposure would have been tricky... Only comment is re: something encroaching on the right hand side of the frame, not sure what it is.
I'd also be tempted to crop some off the top to focus and keep your viewer on the bridge and skyline, and not wander off into the sky.

thanks
Very very nice...but maybe try this...open in Photoshop and go to variations. Click on the cyan box 2 times and the blue box once. It takes out most of the brown and looks cooler to my eyes. This is only refining the image to my taste. If you think it looks better the way it is then that's also fine. The image still rocks!

thanks for the input ,though I quite like the reddish "daredevil" feel, the strong warm colours are what I like about the shot. each to their own I guess.
Thanks everyone for the comments
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Postby mic on Tue Aug 16, 2005 11:55 pm

Beeeeeautifull !

Yes, Crop that right a bit and a bit of the bottom left and I think you will have a Story :roll:

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bridge version two

Postby vrboy on Wed Aug 17, 2005 12:18 am

okay got rid of the ugly thing in the right and cropped sky a bit
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Postby big pix on Wed Aug 17, 2005 12:46 am

.......now you have a great pix.......
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Postby Slider on Wed Aug 17, 2005 1:07 am

Great shot. I was going to suggest that you do what you did and then as I read down the thread I saw that you had done it anyway. Very nice :D
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Postby KerryPierce on Wed Aug 17, 2005 10:18 am

That's really a neat pano. Lots of color. Very cool subject. :D
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Postby Cyrus on Wed Aug 17, 2005 8:37 pm

Great shot mate, I've taken shots in the evening of that Story Bridge from nearly the same spot. Looks as if you may have taken them from an elevate position though. There are some great balcony's on various apartments in Bowen Tce, pitty I don't know anybody who lives there.

That photo is worthy of printing... straight to the pool room.

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Postby BBJ on Wed Aug 17, 2005 9:02 pm

Nice pic i like it.
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Postby elffinarts on Wed Aug 17, 2005 9:13 pm

very printworthy! that second version is even better :D

very nice work for hand held!
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Postby Alex on Wed Aug 17, 2005 9:51 pm

Great shot.

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thanks everyone

Postby vrboy on Thu Aug 18, 2005 2:09 am

thanks forr the great comments, I think I will print it. ANy suggestions on paper and printers? I am thinking Ilfochrome maybe?
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Postby Dougie on Sat Aug 20, 2005 11:19 pm

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Fantastic shot, love the warm colours and the cropping just completes the image
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Postby ozonejunkie on Sat Aug 20, 2005 11:36 pm

Awesome job!

That is just sooo well done! Reminds me how much I miss Queensland. :(

What program was it stitched in?

Job well done!
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Postby kamran on Sun Aug 21, 2005 12:09 am

Most lovely! Great colors and exposure. Makes me want to do panos myself (too bad that I suck at it big time).
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program used to stich

Postby vrboy on Mon Aug 22, 2005 7:36 pm

Awesome job!

That is just sooo well done! Reminds me how much I miss Queensland.

What program was it stitched in?

All done in cs2 photomerge
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