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Does this work??

PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:46 pm
by cc@t
Was staring at the original of this for ages trying to decide what to do with it - finally came up with this. Dont know if it works???

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:50 pm
by cc@t
Whoops - This was the original......

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:54 pm
by Atorie
To be honest it doesn't do much for me but some ideas to improve it may be to try and bring some more detail out of the shadows (especially in the dark corner of the wall) and maybe change the frame to make the border even all around...

PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:56 pm
by ozimax
I really like the original, the green roof is wonderful, Max

PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:58 pm
by Alpha_7
I really like what you've done with it, great tones. :)

PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:03 pm
by Alex
I really like the green in No.2.

Alex

PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:09 pm
by PiroStitch
I'm with everybody else and placing my preference with the 2nd pic however I'm not too fond how close the right edge of the building has nearly been cropped off.

Maybe do a little bit more PP to really give the green an extra punch.

PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:35 pm
by ozczecho
Yeah I like the colour version as well. Maybe next time also try zoom out a little..looks like the foreground has some nice colours, and at the moment building looks a little squashed in.