shooting wide 12-24DX

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shooting wide 12-24DX

Postby wendellt on Tue Aug 23, 2005 7:58 pm

I was fortunate enough to get a 12-24DX
at first i was quite auspicious about the results of this lens, being a wide angle lens heavily affected by barrel distortion and chromatic abberation.

Despite that I have learned to love the lens, the distortion at 12mm has opened up a whole new world for me being wonderful, weird and wide.

I figured at 12mm f8 was the sweetspot, i went through to f4 and f16
this is a top left 100% crop of the original 12MP image, where most of the optical distortion is noticable.

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Notice how the scene looks more dramatic at 12mm
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Then off to shoot the opera house
14mm f8, notice how the opera house sails look bigger than they are.
Bigger version here
http://www.zeduce.org/images/experimental/12_24mm_1_big.jpg
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Another angle at 12mm f/8, at this point i'm loving the dramatic distortion.
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Creative use of a flash unit fired multiple times during a 20 second exposure at 12mm f16, preview cropped
bigger version here:
http://www.zeduce.org/images/experimental/Ghost_of_Carthona.jpg
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Postby christiand on Tue Aug 23, 2005 8:06 pm

Hi Wendell,

did you use the strobe on the SB (800?) for image 2 ?
Great ideas and I like the photos.

Cheers,
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awesome!!

Postby vrboy on Tue Aug 23, 2005 8:14 pm

Great pics Wendell, I just unwrapped my new tamron 11-18mm
this morning havent had a chance to fully play with it yet, if you dont mind my asking how did you achieve shot two?
its awesome! were you writing something or just random patterns?
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Postby wendellt on Tue Aug 23, 2005 9:23 pm

christiand wrote:Hi Wendell,

did you use the strobe on the SB (800?) for image 2 ?
Great ideas and I like the photos.

Cheers,
CD


Hi Christiand and VRBoy

I used the strobe button on the sb800 whirled around, then took out my torch went freestyle then fill flashed twice, i learned long ago to write anything legible while in front of the camera you need be be facing a mirror, as you have to write backwards - which is difficult, so now i just scribble freestyle
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Postby owen on Tue Aug 23, 2005 9:52 pm

I love the last shot, it looks fantastic. The blad headed man (dunno if it's you or not) suits the environment perfectly!

Nice job :)
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Postby Alex on Tue Aug 23, 2005 9:59 pm

Great shots, Wendelt. I really like the last one.

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Postby robboh on Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:42 pm

Wendell, looks like you have had a much more creative play with your new lens than I did with mine :D
Love the perspective on the Opera House sails in the 2nd of the two. Almost makes it look a cathedral!
The last one is a very interesting idea and I really like the results.
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Postby NetMagi on Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:05 am

I'll chime in on liking the last one as well. . . great idea and well exposed considering the # of flashes, etc.
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Postby rokkstar on Wed Aug 24, 2005 9:21 am

Cool stuff wendell.
I want to tag along with you and see how you do that freestyling.
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Postby wendellt on Fri Aug 26, 2005 5:50 pm

rokkstar wrote:Cool stuff wendell.
I want to tag along with you and see how you do that freestyling.


No problem always willing to get people involved in such midnight marauding.
One day i hope to have a group of urban light graffiti poets spaned across sydney freestylin' such activities should keep my mind off lens lust before i go away on holiday

lets organize a time

anyone else who wants to tag along is welcome
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Postby Matt. K on Fri Aug 26, 2005 5:53 pm

Creative imagery! Keep it coming.
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Postby JordanP on Fri Aug 26, 2005 8:28 pm

Great shots Wendellt!

I particularly like the creative and dramatic effect of the second image - keep it coming :)
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