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Yellow wall and sky

PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 1:12 am
by krpolak
Did this quick shot today lunch time. I know it could be good to have one cloud upper on the sky, however I still like it. Your thoughs are welcome :)

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Regards,

K.Polak

PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 6:13 am
by Sheetshooter
Krystian,

What a cracker. I feel your desire for a cloud could be solved at the same time as adding power to the content by cropping the top off down to the bottom of the black triangle of the overhang. It may then also need a little less of the ochre wall at the right to set the balance back in place.

This stuff is your strong point and is always a delight.

Cheers,

PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 10:29 am
by krpolak
Sheetshooter,

When I start to think more about this photo I found the the most atractive part is the balustrade and sky behind. This creates openess, way to escape from walls. That is the subject. Your advice about croping the image from the top helps to sort out whole scene and put more emphasize on relation between balustrade and sky. And I like it :)

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Thanks for advice :)

K.Polak

PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 9:07 pm
by Sheetshooter
Kristian,

Your cropped photo works much better for me. Strip away the extraneous elements and get to the core essence of the motif. Where it used to be about PLACE it is now about SPIRIT. And that still in your style of mature sophistication and intellect of vision.

Cheers,