Hi cc@t
What a poser! I think the front bird new that it was being photographed!
My eyes tend to get drawn away from the front bird and drawn to the ones at the top of the image, which I find a bit distracting. Did you take any with different DOF? I wonder if having the others in slightly sharper focus would help.
(please note that I am a rank amatuer/beginner and may be on the wrong track completely - just my thoughts for what they're worth
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Cheers