B & W at the beach

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B & W at the beach

Postby stubbsy on Sun Aug 28, 2005 11:25 pm

I'm in love with the texture of B & W at the mo. Here are three experiments with some shots from the recent Stockton sand dunes trip. Click a pic for a larger version.

I'd love to know if these work for you or not. You can be brutal - I am :wink:

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Postby spartikus on Sun Aug 28, 2005 11:47 pm

Nice conversions stubbsy - the third one works a lot more for me, the branch/stump constrasted with the white sand makes the b&w more appealing. (Not sure how well that was expressed, but hopefully you get the idea!) BTW, what conversion technique are you using?
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:01 am

Sorry Peter but no. In my humble opinion B&W pics need to be dramatic to take full effect of being in that medium. Your first pic approaches this but has no focal point. :wink:
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Postby Hlop on Mon Aug 29, 2005 9:50 am

Hi Peter,

I'd try to make them much more contrast and they might "play" then
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:49 pm

Mikhail, Chris - Thanks for the honest criticism. I'll revisit these and make them more gritty.

Spartikus - I used the B & W tonal enhancer filter from the Nik Color Efex Pro plugins
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Postby Hlop on Mon Aug 29, 2005 1:53 pm

stubbsy wrote:Spartikus - I used the B & W tonal enhancer filter from the Nik Color Efex Pro plugins


Given example has contrast source, so BW conversion looks contrast but we shut on Saturday under cloudy sky with soft light. I beleive bumping contrast up will help a lot
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Aug 30, 2005 7:34 pm

Gave up on getting the three above to look right, but I think this one works much better:

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Postby Matt. K on Tue Aug 30, 2005 7:41 pm

Peter
That first image is a stunner. It's as if the viewer is low down on an old sailing boat...on the high seas. It has a marvelous perspective! I think it will make a great background to something else one day.....a Photoshop montage waiting to happen. But it also works on its own.
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