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Australian wild flowers
Posted:
Mon Aug 29, 2005 11:45 pmby Willy wombat
Just processed a few from the weekend.
Used circ pol filter + kit lense
Enjoy
[img]http://www.fototime.com/{9B890BAF-2C27-446F-89F4-E8C332267C32}/picture.JPG[/img]
Posted:
Tue Aug 30, 2005 7:37 pmby Willy wombat
107 views and no comments...
Is it run-of-the-mill?
If this shot is no good can someone please point out why?
Cheers
WW
Posted:
Tue Aug 30, 2005 7:38 pmby Manta
I like it Willy. Sort of creeps up on you after you look at it a couple of times. I guess if I had to add something constructive it would be that the subject is a little busy - lots of different varieties that almost compete with each other for the viewer's attention. It's hard to know what to focus on.
Posted:
Tue Aug 30, 2005 7:43 pmby edneeves
I seem to get caught in the trap of using too little DOF as I am seriously in love with the effect. I think that this shot is probably suffering from the same problem.
Maybe hold back on the polarisation also, its a wonderous filter but overcooking it can take some of the impact away.
Just my 2c worth.
Ed.
Posted:
Tue Aug 30, 2005 7:44 pmby Oneputt
I think that Simon has hit the nail on the head. It is a nice enough image, but struggles to stand on it's own without a focal point.
Posted:
Tue Aug 30, 2005 8:06 pmby Willy wombat
No focal point. Too busy. I can see your point.
Thanks for the feedback. Will work on it.
Cheers guys!
Posted:
Tue Aug 30, 2005 8:36 pmby Aussie Dave
WW
I agree on the lack of a focal point....my eye seems to wander around the image, not sure on what to stop at.
However the colour in the sky is beautiful. Such a nice blue.
Keep on, keeping on.....
