Morning Mist - Vic High Country

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Morning Mist - Vic High Country

Postby nat on Sat Sep 03, 2005 12:17 am

This image was captured early morning. It was as we headed up the track from Sheepyard Flat in Victoria.

Honest feedback sought - I can take it!!
(I am particularly interested in comments regarding composition and framing as this was captured some time back with my old Coolpix 995, not my D70s)

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Thanks for taking the time to look at a beginners pic! :)

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EDIT: text altered to reflect that this is not a capture from my D70s.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Sep 03, 2005 12:27 am

Nat - there is a mystic appeal to your pic - the track, the trees and the mist all add up to a well composed shot that would have looked ordinary, if not for the mist - I like it :D
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Postby fozzie on Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:10 am

meerkat/Nat - excellent first shot post. The total composition works for me, and the fog just sets it off, well done :)
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Postby Aussie Dave on Sat Sep 03, 2005 8:44 am

Meerkat
a well rounded photo & the mist does give it that eerie look.

I like the composition, however, I wonder what the shot would look like from a perspective much lower to the ground & maybe even to one side of the track (with perhaps some of the track in the foreground to add a little foreground interest) ?

I find that often, it is so easy to get caught up with taking the photo, we can forget to try different ideas or perspectives (which may or may not work - depending on the scene) and just take it from eye level, 5+ feet off the ground.

Just an idea for next time....though I certainly wouldn't say there is anything wrong with your photo (& composition) in this instance :)

Also, which lens did you use @ what was the EXIF data ?
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Postby Hlop on Sat Sep 03, 2005 9:23 am

Same as people above :) Like this photo :)
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Postby nat on Sat Sep 03, 2005 9:39 am

Thanks Chris,Fozzie and Hlop.
I was thinking along the same lines as you - the mist makes all the difference. (The truth is, I probably would not have even considered stopping to capture this if it wasn't misty.

Aussie Dave,
thanks for your ideas. This is exactly the sort of thing I need to hear. Funny, I often get down low etc when photographing at close range, but never seem to think of it for landscape/ bigger distances. So hopefully I remember to next time!
Sorry, no can do on the EXIF data as this capture was from my old Coolpix995 and I carelessly overwrote the EXIF when I did the original conversion. :oops:
(I will edit my post at the top to indicate that this was not captured with my D70s.) This was why I was only interested in feedback on its composition etc)
Thanks again for your thoughts - they're much appreciated. BTW Fozzie, I can't claim this as my first post. This was my first one if you missed it. :)
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Postby fozzie on Sat Sep 03, 2005 10:34 am

meerkat,

meerkat wrote:BTW Fozzie, I can't claim this as my first post. This was my first one if you missed it. :)


My apology, I did miss it :oops:
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