Few more images from Dee Why to Manly scenic walk
Comments and critique are welcome!
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Anyone? Don't be shy - I'm asking for critique, so, if it's crap tell me that but explain why is it crap
I noticed that recently people leave mostly positive comments but we're here to learn from each other and I prefer to know what doesn't work in my image and always open for constructive negative comments. It won't kill me but next time I won't do same mistake (at least, I'll try) Mikhail
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G'day,
Oh, OK, I'll have a go 
I like the first and third shots, particularly the third, the second I'm not sure about... I like the layout of #1 and #2, #4 just needs the distracting brick wall in the background cropped or cloned out.. #1 would have been tempting to remove the bottom and bottom right flower from the frame? Did you change the colour of the lone flower or just a good catch  I have to ask
Just trying to help
Cheers. Aka Andrew
I really like #1. The one white daisy amongst all the purple ones does it for me. If you got rid of the scrunched up looking daisy just above the white one, i think I'd like the shot even more.
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Thanks a lot for comments, guys!
Andrew, I didn't change a colour of a white daisy it was just growing among the pink ones. Brick wall ... Actually, I was trying to add something with it to the picture but I'll try to crop it if you think it's distracting. And the same I'll try to crop the 1st to see if it works or doesn't John, It'd be real trick to accurately remove scrunched daisy but I'll give it a try when I have bit more time Mikhail
Hasselblad 501CM, XPAN, Wista DX 4x5, Pentax 67, Nikon D70, FED-2
I also liked number 1 the most (except for the "scrunched up daisy" which I thought might of been a butterfly on my first quick look
Next time though, maybe try a lower perspective...sort of to get a feeling of being amongst the daisies. Deb "Sometimes when you are sad Poko, it's good to hug the monkey."
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