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Postby MHD on Mon Aug 22, 2005 9:49 am

An Abstract/design photo
Natural light, Micro Nikkor 105/2.8, handheld
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Postby redline on Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:04 am

considering your title is "serve cold" i would have preferred that the writing as a tad more focused.
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Postby HappyFotographer on Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:15 am

with some condensation on it as well!

What is the beverage may I ask?

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Postby Sheetshooter on Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:25 am

Would that be the Reader's Digest Condensed version that you refer to Deb?
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Postby MHD on Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:32 am

hehe... thanks for the suggestions..
This was a shot of chance... It was a can of Kilkenny I had with lunch on saturday...
as for focus, It was a choice between the writing or the ring pull, at that f-stop it could not be both (hand held at 105mm... needed shutter speed)
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Postby gstark on Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:06 am

So, it was a can of lunch. :)
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:20 am

Scott

Apologies in advance for being brutal as I'm only going to focus on what is missing from the shot (you and others know the good).
  • The orange cast doesn't work for me. It's been a month or so since I had a Kilkenny (nice beer :lol: ) so I'm not sure if the top is this colour, but my expectations of the top of a can are for silver
  • I think the shot would have been stronger with some condensation on it (I think you just dampen it and throw salt on it)
  • I'd have liked to have seen the entire circle of the top of the can and possibly some OOF side

So go tell Louise you HAVE to go out and buy some more cans to practice getting it right :wink:
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Postby MHD on Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:27 am

Nope.. definately orange...not silver... Let me see if I can find some mainstream images...
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:36 am

MHD wrote:Nope.. definately orange...not silver... Let me see if I can find some mainstream images...

Scott - your word is all the proof I need.
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Postby Mj on Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:36 am

Nice idea Scott...

For myself I'm happy that not all shots require clinical sharpness as that can detract from the emotional experience.

The colour cast is fine by me as well... not having any idea what the true colour ought to be... and there's nothing wrong with colour via reflection.

The one thing that I think really isn't right here is the cropping and that is giving the shot a poorly balanced appearance.
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