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Postby vrboy on Mon Aug 22, 2005 7:40 pm

Hi Everyone, I have been hibernating for a few days recharging the mind.
here is a pano I did a Mooloolaba Wharf in Qld late last week, freehand.
Stitched in cs2, two small patch tool fixes, curves used to bring out base of image, gradient on top to reveal sky and velvia plugin from adobe studio online.
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Postby Hlop on Mon Aug 22, 2005 8:12 pm

Quite nice pano :) Good PP too. Well done!
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Postby Atorie on Mon Aug 22, 2005 8:22 pm

Very nice capture, Would love to see that blown up on a wall!
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Postby Dargan on Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:15 pm

I'm going down there with a new perspective now. :D :D
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Postby bago100 on Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:20 pm

Jeepers that looks seriously good! Well done.
Are you going to have it printed Dargan?
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Postby christiand on Mon Aug 22, 2005 10:26 pm

Very nice work :D

I'd like to see the originals or let me say I' like to see from what originals you may have cropped and stitched.
How would you consider cropping in such a way that the building ond the left hand side is lost ?

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printing and cropping

Postby vrboy on Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:23 pm

Very nice work

I'd like to see the originals or let me say I' like to see from what originals you may have cropped and stitched.
How would you consider cropping in such a way that the building ond the left hand side is lost ?

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the shot is original with no crop at all, there were five shots in portrait using the kit 18-70 lens.
I did think of cropping but it lost the "feel" of the shot without the left bank
that being said I do agree the building it imposes on the shot so I may even photoshop it out.
I think it is one I may print along with the other story bridge post I recently did. I am thinking of Ilfochrome prints has anyone else had anything printed on Ilfochrome before? BTW Graham it is my shot not Dargans, just thought I'd clear that up.

Cheers,
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Postby Alex on Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:25 pm

I like it! Nice colour range.
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finer details

Postby vrboy on Mon Aug 22, 2005 11:26 pm

also there is a lone person sitting on th point at the right side looking at the sunset, you cant see it this size, but it adds to the shot
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Postby BBJ on Tue Aug 23, 2005 6:26 am

Very well done vrboy, looks good.
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:48 am

vrboy

Nicely done pano. The composition with the boats in the centre and the water running to right and left really aids the shots as the eye is naturally drawn to investigate all the beauty that's on offer here. Well done and definitely it's one for printing.
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Postby Killakoala on Tue Aug 23, 2005 2:14 pm

Fantastic Pano.

What i really like about the image is the sky reflection in the marina.
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