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Postby genji on Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:00 pm

its not a waterfall but man made embankment on the Yarra River.

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Postby Alex on Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:07 pm

Very nice, genji. Hand-held :wink: ?

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Postby genji on Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:11 pm

Alex wrote:Very nice, genji. Hand-held :wink: ?

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yep, vr is amazing :wink:

been meaning to play around with long exp on waterfall/water elements...
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Postby robboh on Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:55 pm

Nice shots. The second one almost looks like molten lead instead of water.
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Postby genji on Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:57 pm

robboh wrote:Nice shots. The second one almost looks like molten lead instead of water.


thanks, but its ashame the Yarra's water is so 'brown'
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Postby Jamie on Tue Aug 23, 2005 11:27 pm

Dights falls never looked so good!

I used to swim down there when i was alot younger, know it well. :)

Great pictures, i like them both.

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Postby Slider on Tue Aug 23, 2005 11:45 pm

Great shots Genji. 2nd one is brilliant. Very surreal :D
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Aug 24, 2005 12:06 am

Nicely done Genji :D Man that makes the Yarra River look drinkable....
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Postby Willy wombat on Wed Aug 24, 2005 12:09 am

#2 is serene. I like this effect a lot. Very nice
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Postby genji on Wed Aug 24, 2005 9:42 am

thanks for the reply. I've learnt a few things form the excursion.

1. the sun sets too fast once the exp is at 5sec, doesn't take long for it to go past 20sec. It doesn't leave time to re-compose another scene. its too risky to walk around in total darkness around waters edge.

2. ND filters would help, it would give a longer timeframe to re-compse.
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Postby johnd on Wed Aug 24, 2005 10:53 am

Genji, I love that second shot. If it wasn't for those two sticks, you'd swear it was molten metal. Have you tried PPing the sticks out of it?

And they weren't hand held were they? VR can't be that good. If it is, I'd better break the wallet out and give Birdy a call.
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Postby wendellt on Wed Aug 24, 2005 11:42 am

Genji

BEautiful shots

but how did you get the image looking dark at a 20 second exposure, even at f8 during an overcast day your shots should be overexposed

to me the exposure times looks consistent with 4 seconds
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Postby genji on Wed Aug 24, 2005 1:30 pm

johnd wrote:Genji, I love that second shot. If it wasn't for those two sticks, you'd swear it was molten metal. Have you tried PPing the sticks out of it?.


it was too dark to remove the stick physically. i think they distract from the image because they appear to be miscellaneous to the image?

johnd wrote:And they weren't hand held were they? VR can't be that good. If it is, I'd better break the wallet out and give Birdy a call.



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no of course not, i am ashame to admit I'm using a $50 velbon tripod :oops:
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Postby genji on Wed Aug 24, 2005 1:33 pm

wendellt wrote:Genji

BEautiful shots

but how did you get the image looking dark at a 20 second exposure, even at f8 during an overcast day your shots should be overexposed

to me the exposure times looks consistent with 4 seconds


the yarra rivers water is a dul dirty brown, thats the colour you see in the images and also it was about 6:15pm'ist
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Postby johnd on Wed Aug 24, 2005 1:45 pm

genji wrote: i am ashame to admit I'm using a $50 velbon tripod :oops:


Genji, I wouldn't be ashamed to admit it. The shots are great, especially the 2nd. And it's got to be the result that counts.

I got one of my tripods for free when I bought a camera bag. I don't use this tripod as it waves about in the breeze.
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Postby genji on Wed Aug 24, 2005 1:52 pm

johnd wrote:
genji wrote: i am ashame to admit I'm using a $50 velbon tripod :oops:


Genji, I wouldn't be ashamed to admit it. The shots are great, especially the 2nd. And it's got to be the result that counts.

I got one of my tripods for free when I bought a camera bag. I don't use this tripod as it waves about in the breeze.


I also took somes shots at a fwy pedestrain overpass, it was 'breezey'. i'll post when i get the chance
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