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Postby xerubus on Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:07 pm

.... are blowing in the wind.

Came across this lonely gum tree right on the edge of ocean... Not sure exactly what it is, but the b&w really works for me in this shot....

Comments and critique more than welcome.

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Postby radar on Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:17 pm

Hi Xerubus,

I find the tree a bit too dark, if you can put a bit of detail back into it, I think it may work better, IMHO

Very different then your PJ work :)

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Postby xerubus on Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:19 pm

radar wrote:Hi Xerubus,

I find the tree a bit too dark, if you can put a bit of detail back into it, I think it may work better, IMHO

Very different then your PJ work :)

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the processed shot with detail doesn't really do it for me.... I'm a fan of the ghostly dark shot :)

Very different from the recent stuff I've been doing... but nice to take a little break and find some happiness ;)

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Postby robboh on Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:59 pm

I like it, but then Im a bit of a fan of really contrasty B&W.

Possibly might have gotten a little lower so there was some gaps between the pines in the background and the lower branches of the main subject.
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Postby mic on Tue Aug 23, 2005 11:06 pm

Love it Mark, just love it.

My sort of stuff.

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Postby mic on Tue Aug 23, 2005 11:07 pm

Sorry again,

Can you please explain your process.

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Postby gstark on Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:36 am

Mark,

What Robboh said. A nice capture, but a slightly lower angle to separate the tree from the background would make quite a difference, I think.
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Postby xerubus on Wed Aug 24, 2005 8:02 am

robboh & gstark.... i think you guys might be spot on.... time to revisit the tree and play... ;)

mic.... photoshop.... gorman_b&w process (posted somewhere else in forum about a year ago or so) with a slightly brown tinge through it. adjusted curves to bring out the harsh shadows.

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Postby KerryPierce on Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:25 pm

Very cool, Mark. I like this a great deal. :D
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