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Advanced photomontage (1 image)

Postby krpolak on Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:05 pm

Firstly, let me justified the title. Presented image is a mixture of photography, 3d graphics and matte paiting.

Secondly I would like ask you about your feeling about this image from photographic and simply viewer point of view. Does it speak to you, would you like to go there etc

Also any other comments, sugestions and impresions are welcome.

Sorry for small resolution, but I cannot post it higher than that.

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Postby genji on Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:13 pm

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very pleasing image of a proposed boutique resort. I can not tell what is not real ( i assume the building is not real) and real ( i assum the swan, fountain and birds are real)

the building does have alot of detail to make it look 'real'.
also the illumination of the buildings fits in with the scenery. did you use radiosity and Global illumination??

great job!
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Postby wendellt on Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:18 pm

do you work in architecural visualization?

It's nice but for more dramtic effect which I have seen you pull off consistently in the past

I would rotate the scene and move the camera so the building is 60 degrees from the axis point end of the building acing viewer, that way you get better perspective see more of the building and so on, i wll have to draw a little picture so you get what i mean, but i will do that after work hours
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Postby Oneputt on Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:22 pm

Truthfully I find the image bland and uninspiring. Sorry but it would not make me want to go there.
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Postby krpolak on Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:25 pm

Genji,

Your are about right what is real what not and yes, it is GI.

Wendellt, yes , I do architectural visualisation as well. I agree with camera view. This image is anly part of the whole think. The idea you propose is happing now in animation form :)

This view is rather for marketing people, to show how great and enviromental area is ;-)

Oneputt, thank for your honest feeling. This is what I need :)

Thanks guys for you feedback, I appreciate that :)

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Postby genji on Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:34 pm

krpolak wrote:Genji,

Your are about right what is real what not and yes, it is GI.

Wendellt, yes , I do architectural visualisation as well. I agree with camera view. This image is anly part of the whole think. The idea you propose is happing now in animation form :)

This view is rather for marketing people, to show how great and enviromental area is ;-)

Oneputt, thank for your honest feeling. This is what I need :)

Thanks guys for you feedback, I appreciate that :)

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i think the building follows the idea 'touching the earth lightly' approach, where mininal damage is done to the surrounding.

although could you have a couple engaging with the scene (walking along the beach??) gives a sense of proportion.
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Postby wendellt on Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:34 pm

K

you know metrodarchitects?
Morf?
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Postby krpolak on Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:49 pm

genji

although could you have a couple engaging with the scene (walking along the beach??) gives a sense of proportion


There are few people on the deck, if this is what you mean. However animation will just showing landscape design rather and marketing features, so animated walking people are not in budget. However I agree, this site has potencial for good marketing shots :)

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you know metrodarchitects?
Morf?
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Not really, but I know Arterra Design (us), Archietctural Images, C3D, Involve Studio and few more talking about 3d arch viz in Sydney :)

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Postby wendellt on Mon Aug 29, 2005 12:55 pm

well your architectural background explains your keen eye for design and composition

I too am from the design industry
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Postby krpolak on Mon Aug 29, 2005 1:01 pm

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well your architectural background explains your keen eye for design and composition


Actually I was graduated as a software developer and had a couple years experience in this area starting from low level hardware programing to java and databases business system ;-) But then I found that I should be paid for my hobby with is 3d and computer graphics so I change my profesion :)

I too am from the design industry


What do you do in your job?

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Postby krpolak on Mon Aug 29, 2005 1:08 pm

Here is other view form this projects. Again here most of the image is 3d graphics. View outside is obvously a photo as well as few other, small items:

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Postby wendellt on Mon Aug 29, 2005 1:10 pm

I am part of the creative department at T-bone a web development company
when i first started i did multimedia concept develpment and programing for eLearning systems and Kiosks.
Currently I focus on Graphic Design for websites and Print

Although i started out in the Advertising industry where i worked with many pro photographers and Digital Content Creation houses.

I also have a keen eye for design

Love the 1960s aesthetic
and today's minimalism which i see in your work
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Postby genji on Mon Aug 29, 2005 1:25 pm

k

is that brazil GI at work??

impressive stuff
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Postby krpolak on Mon Aug 29, 2005 1:33 pm

wendellt

Love the 1960s aesthetic
and today's minimalism which i see in your work


Now I understand your recent portfolio shots :) Thanks for good word, I am trying my the best :)

genji

is that brazil GI at work??
impressive stuff


No. Recently I use quite a lot Vray.

This one was pretty quick job, looks good, however having more time would result in better shots. There is always issue between quality and time in pro projects, unfortunatelly. Heh.

Hope to update and release my website soon. There will be few better projects :)

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Postby kipper on Mon Aug 29, 2005 2:30 pm

There is always issue between quality and time in pro projects, unfortunatelly


Sounds the same for every industry I've been involved in :)
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Postby krpolak on Mon Aug 29, 2005 3:00 pm

kipper

Sounds the same for every industry I've been involved in


I can guess so hehe :)

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