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My Wedding Proofs

Postby mic on Sun Sep 11, 2005 10:50 am

view mics wedding poofs here

Vince, if you are out there :shock: please tell me what you think, no doubt as good as what you can produce but this is my 1st with still a lot to learn.

The main thing is the Bride is over the moon & it looks much better in a beautifull leather bound Album with a Perpex Font cover with the 1st image on it.

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Postby Aussie Dave on Sun Sep 11, 2005 10:56 am

sorry Mic, we need a login password ?!? :roll:
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Re: My Wedding Proofs

Postby leek on Sun Sep 11, 2005 10:58 am

mic wrote:view mics wedding poofs here


Was it a Gay wedding??? :lol: :twisted:
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Postby mic on Sun Sep 11, 2005 11:03 am

hmmmm sorry about that cheif ! :oops:

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No Leek, now go have a leek :lol:

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Re: My Wedding Proofs

Postby Cyrus on Sun Sep 11, 2005 11:05 am

leek wrote:
mic wrote:view mics wedding poofs here


Was it a Gay wedding??? :lol: :twisted:


Haha, that's hilarious... not that there's anything wrong with that! :wink:

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Postby kipper on Sun Sep 11, 2005 11:18 am

Mic I'm very impressed......not an inverted picture in sight!

Ahh, so the album design was by picturegraphs.com
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Postby leek on Sun Sep 11, 2005 11:23 am

Sorry about my previous quip... I couldn't help but take advantage of your typo...

Seriously though Mic... the results look incredibly professional... I love the way that you've combined different sized shots to compose a page in the album.

I did note that the wedding was in March though... why are you publishing it now??? have you only just finished PPing the shots??? :-)
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Postby mic on Sun Sep 11, 2005 11:33 am

Geez Louise :shock: you're right Leek :shock: what a bloody idiot I am, silly me thought you were having a poke ooops sorry a dig at my wonder woman status :roll: :roll:

Well picked up, yes 6 months in the making :shock: one bloody big learning curve & finding the right contacts.
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One very patient Bride & Groom.

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Postby kipper on Sun Sep 11, 2005 11:36 am

No offense Mic, because it's a great album. But the album composition was done by a 3rd party wasn't it?
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Postby Alex on Sun Sep 11, 2005 11:41 am

Mic,

I can't access it. Once I put the username and password an error comes up.

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Postby Alex on Sun Sep 11, 2005 11:46 am

Ok, it's working now. Looks very professional. No offense, but if the wedding was in March and you only have the proofs now, did it take you 0.5 year to get them done? :-) Or are you only letting us see them now?

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Re: My Wedding Proofs

Postby shutterbug on Sun Sep 11, 2005 11:52 am

mic wrote:
Vince, if you are out there :shock: please tell me what you think, no doubt as good as what you can produce but this is my 1st with still a lot to learn.

The main thing is the Bride is over the moon & it looks much better in a beautifull leather bound Album with a Perpex Font cover with the 1st image on it.

Mic. :wink:


If it is your first it looks very nice. My first wedding was similar :)

Personally I do not like too use too much back images on my pages, but that is my opinion.

Main thing is the couple love it :lol:

ps.I love my job, yesterdays wedding My Blog

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Postby PiroStitch on Sun Sep 11, 2005 12:01 pm

Nice one Mic :) Composition of the album is nice and easy on the eye. Great to hear that the couple loved it.
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Postby mic on Sun Sep 11, 2005 12:48 pm

Alex, yes I know, refer to my above reply to Leek + chuck in 2 young kiddies into the whole thing and you have not a lot going your way.

But I got there in the end. :lol: :lol:

Yes Kipper you are correct, I'm getting better with layers in PS but not this good yet, in time, in time. :roll: :roll:

Thanks all & Vince, good to know a trained eye likes.

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Postby BBJ on Sun Sep 11, 2005 2:56 pm

Mic, you have done well grasshopper to retain yourself from your usuall trait. But mate i think you did a loverly job, the couple will be proud.
Ok now back to the 3rd party bit someone did the colage work or is this one of those programs i have sort of seen that does it for you as i know they are around. Well done mate, got more guts than me. hang on im a fat prick maybe not but u know what i mean.LOL
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Postby kipper on Sun Sep 11, 2005 3:01 pm

BBJ the link is:

http://www.picturegraphs.com


If you looked at all the images of Mic's wedding, you'd see at the very last one it says it was done by Picturegraphs for DifferentImages.

Btw, Mic.....I'd be chuffed if I was involved in this product. I've taken photos for a few family and friends weddings, just to provide a backup if the pro doing the shooting misses something or creates a load of shit shots. I know if I came out with a load of photos like this I'd be seriously happy about it.
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Postby mic on Sun Sep 11, 2005 3:26 pm

Thanks Kipp for the rap :wink:

BBJ, it's Photoshop and just a matter of getting up to speed with Layers and putting an image in the background and lowering it's opacity.

I'm working on one now and with a bit of practise & getting your work flow right, it really isn't that hard.

As some of the pro's would know here it's just a matter of confidence & practise and if you have an interest in it.

Presto, the worlds your oyster.

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Postby BBJ on Sun Sep 11, 2005 4:00 pm

Well Mic mate, good onya mate good to see you are having a go. I think they are great so yeh all time and practice.
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Postby Geoff on Sun Sep 11, 2005 5:08 pm

Great shots Mic! You should be proud! :)
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Postby big pix on Sun Sep 11, 2005 5:26 pm

very impressive.........and very nice work.........
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Postby Aussie Dave on Sun Sep 11, 2005 6:35 pm

Mic
there are some really fantastic photos in there. I have no doubt the Bride & Groom will be absolutely thrilled with these....I would be !

My only critisism is that the crops on some of the headshots (mainly on Page 2) look a bit "tight"....IMHO, making it look like the photo was rushed or not composed correctly.

Great effort and keep up with it :D
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Postby sejanus on Sun Sep 11, 2005 9:09 pm

a good first effort for sure. you either had nice soft light or you are better at metering than a lot of so called pro's out there :)

Only thing I'd suggest is ;

- Don't shoot from down low looking up to people, it's ok to do it for the odd couple shot if there is a specific idea in mind but imho very unflattering most of the time, especially in a group shot.

- be careful of the sky in your backgrounds. you obviously only have a certain amount of dynamic range to work with but try and position yourself (where realistic) to avoid a blown white sky. I know thats not always possible.

- not sure what lenses you were using, but try and shoot with pretty wide apertures where possible, you want to really isolate the bride and the groom when appropriate. As an idea for what I use, I have the 85/1.4 pretty much permanently on one body the whole day, and on the other body have either a long lens or a WA lens or a zoom lens. Different strokes for different folks though.

- When in doubt, stand back a step. Easier to crop later than trying to deal with a shot where someone head is cut off :)

hope this helps a bit.

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Postby mic on Sun Sep 11, 2005 9:39 pm

Cheers Geoff :wink:

Thanks bp :wink:

Aussie Dave, thanks for the tips :wink: A lot went wrong that day but somehow I put this together and wella !

sejanus, thanks very helpfull :wink: I did have soft light & a D70 of course :D
Oh and luck :lol: :lol: Good tips to have though.

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Thanks all for all the tips & liking the pics.
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Postby marcus on Sun Sep 11, 2005 10:03 pm

Good effort Mic! Apart from your obvious technical brilliance :roll: these shots have a nice candid easy feeling about them. That's what I like about these images, there's a mood, a feel about them that links everything together. That linking of shots with a certain "feel" is the key to a wonderful group of images.
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Postby mic on Sun Sep 11, 2005 10:15 pm

Thanks Marcus,

I'm glad you picked that up because thats exactly what I wanted to capture "A Story"

Cheers mate, :wink:

Yes, time, it's quickly slipping away :(

technical brilliance

:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: I think I have something hard coming on :roll: :roll:

Ooops sorry, please don't talk dirty to me.

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Postby KerryPierce on Mon Sep 12, 2005 6:08 am

Quite impressive, Mic. I think you're well on your way to becoming a famous wedding photog. :D

Nothing wrong with that, we'll still talk to you. :shock: 8)
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Postby mic on Mon Sep 12, 2005 8:56 am

Still a fair way to go Kerry :lol:

Thanks for looking.

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