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Beach images

Postby owen on Sun Sep 25, 2005 9:43 pm

Hi guys.

Here are a couple of images taken at the beach this evening, on a very dull day colour-wise. I had the intention of taking photos to turn into black and whites, however after finding this green muck I thought it would enhance the photos quite a bit.

Let me know what you think!

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Postby Killakoala on Sun Sep 25, 2005 9:58 pm

Owen, they are both very good but the last one is tops. I can see them on an inspirational poster somewhere. It is a great shame there are houses in it, but some creative cropping will sort them out.

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Postby stubbsy on Sun Sep 25, 2005 10:10 pm

Owen

Both are great and I honestly can't pick between them.
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Postby DStrom on Sun Sep 25, 2005 10:28 pm

Owen, the 2nd shot is amazing!

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Postby Manta on Sun Sep 25, 2005 10:28 pm

They're terrific Owen. :D

I think like the first one slightly more, due to it's flatter perspective, lighter overall tones and the fantastic capture of theat breaking wave on the rock.

Go the green muck! It really enhances the images but I'd still love to see them in black and white.
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Postby owen on Sun Sep 25, 2005 10:34 pm

Thanks for all the encouraging comments guys. How are these images colour-wise? I've recently got a new monitor and I'm still getting used to it.

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Postby Manta on Sun Sep 25, 2005 10:38 pm

Fine on mine Owen. Very rich.
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Postby BBJ on Sun Sep 25, 2005 10:46 pm

Look pretty bloody good to me owen, well done.
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Postby ajo43 on Sun Sep 25, 2005 10:47 pm

I like them too Owen. Looks like you used a pretty wide angle lens could you give us the details.

Colour looks fine. I'd be interested to see it in B&W to compare but I think the colour will look better.

Did you get wet?
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Sep 25, 2005 10:51 pm

Owen the colours look pretty good to me. I also think they'll not look as good in B & W, btu I'm happy to be proved wrong :lol: :wink:
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Postby leek on Sun Sep 25, 2005 11:27 pm

Hi Owen...

I love the textures at the front of the second shot...
What time of day were these taken at - what were the shutter speeds / apertures?
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Postby owen on Sun Sep 25, 2005 11:30 pm

Thanks again guys.

I just printed out the second image and it looks really dull... perhaps time to invest in a new printer. Anywho, here's a black and white of it. One thing I noticed is that the textures become more noticable and the green muck practically disappears.

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Postby Hlop on Sun Sep 25, 2005 11:39 pm

Hi Owen,

1st and 2nd are great but B&W is outstanding!
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Postby Zeeke on Sun Sep 25, 2005 11:46 pm

I really gotta admit, the 2nd one looks bloody awesome.. but then i saw the B&W.. and damn its eye catching.. the textures and feeling really pop out... bloody nice work!!

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Postby KerryPierce on Mon Sep 26, 2005 1:39 am

Very nice shots, Owen. #1 is #1 for me. :D
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Postby DionM on Mon Sep 26, 2005 6:25 am

I like the 2nd one. I wonder if a lower crop at the top would get rid of the houses and strengthen the image a little as wel (focus on the low down, dark and mysterious cloud then).

But still great images!

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Postby owen on Mon Sep 26, 2005 9:19 am

Thanks again for all the comments. I will look at either cropping the second or cloning out the houses... but I kind of like the way that there is something in the distance that your eyes are lead to.

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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Sep 26, 2005 9:44 am

Both our outstanding, I think "they're all yummy".
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Postby pippin88 on Mon Sep 26, 2005 10:17 am

I really like these Owen, they have a great sense of movement and atmosphere.
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Postby owen on Mon Sep 26, 2005 11:38 am

Thanks Nick and Craig.

"they're all yummy"
... if you're into green muck, then I'll gladly tell you where this location is! :)
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Postby owen on Mon Sep 26, 2005 11:08 pm

For those who didn't like the houses, do you find this image more pleasing?

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Postby Slider on Mon Sep 26, 2005 11:27 pm

Fantastic shots Owen.

The last one is outstanding.
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Postby Poon on Tue Sep 27, 2005 5:34 am

Owen,
Awesome images! :shock:
Just curious to know the shooting data of the images.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Tue Sep 27, 2005 7:00 am

It probably does look better without the houses.

I wonder what the value of that lost real estate is? :lol:

It is a wonderful image.
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Postby owen on Tue Sep 27, 2005 8:08 am

Poon wrote:Owen,
Awesome images! :shock:
Just curious to know the shooting data of the images.
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Hi Poon.

The EXIF data is:
18mm (kit lens)
f 22.0
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ISO200

Taken on a velbon tripod which now has rusty legs :)

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Postby owen on Tue Sep 27, 2005 8:10 am

Thanks for the comments guys. They really encourage me to get out more and take more photos - I've been very slack lately. I imagine that real estate that I demolished would have been worth more than I'll make in my lifetime :)
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Postby Poon on Thu Sep 29, 2005 4:41 am

Thanks Owen.
Did you take by RAW and then swith to JPEG in Capture 4?
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Postby owen on Thu Sep 29, 2005 7:44 am

Hi Poon. They were shot in Raw and then converted to 16-bit TIFF in Rawshooter Essentials, and then resized and changed to jpeg in photoshop.

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Postby ozimax on Sat Oct 01, 2005 12:16 am

Wow man, love them both, print and poster them immediately!

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Postby marcotrov on Sat Oct 01, 2005 9:55 am

Terrific shots owen. Yeah, I like #1 too!
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Postby Killakoala on Sat Oct 01, 2005 10:34 am

The one without the houses is so much better. For me it has removed the ugliness of suburbia and introduced the solitude of nature, it's enhanced the image beautifully. Really good clone work too. :)
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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Oct 01, 2005 1:11 pm

#2 without the houses has a great deal of appeal. The colours are fantastic and the lead up to the horizon does it for me - well done :D
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Postby avkomp on Sat Oct 01, 2005 3:51 pm

I like the first shot as it is. the moving water adds dramatic effect.

The second one looks better with the houses cloned out, in my opinion.


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Postby mudder on Sat Oct 01, 2005 7:30 pm

#2's a beautiful shot Owen, really nicely framed, great foreground interest... Like the B&W version of it too, totally changes the character of the image...
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Postby owen on Sun Oct 02, 2005 8:49 am

Thanks very much guys, for all your nice and encouraging comments :)

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