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Postby Kris on Wed Sep 28, 2005 12:37 am

Took this tonight not sure why I like it..

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Postby leek on Wed Sep 28, 2005 1:07 am

I can see why you like it, but there seems to be a little bit of distortion going on in this pic... the edge of the wall appears to be bent
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Postby oli on Wed Sep 28, 2005 1:08 am

I like the concept.

A bit too much wall for my liking though, and for some reason the green bag (or something green) between the fence and the wall caught my eye.
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Postby birddog114 on Wed Sep 28, 2005 7:12 am

Don't shoot brick wall, it's our slogan! :lol:
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Postby Kris on Wed Sep 28, 2005 8:26 am

Yes, too much wall and the green whatever is distracting! damn ;)

bent hmm yes must be my crap tripod!
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Postby Killakoala on Wed Sep 28, 2005 8:37 am

Kris wrote:bent hmm yes must be my crap tripod!


Time for a new one, i know where you can get a nice one......

I do like the concept but agree with those above me. I also feel the WB should be corrected too. If you have a 'lonely' concept then you really shouldn't use an 'warm' orange hue to the image, 'cold' blue would be more appropriate or of course my perennial favorite, grainy B&W. :)

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Postby Kris on Wed Sep 28, 2005 2:53 pm

Thanks Steve, ill correct that tonight and will use the B&W method ;)

See how it looks.. maybe i can clone out the green garbage bag..
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Sep 28, 2005 2:55 pm

Always nice to see a pic when the ”boys” have gone home - aka ”the Wall” :lol: :lol:
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Postby Killakoala on Wed Sep 28, 2005 6:46 pm

Is that the same wall Chris? I've never been to the one you are referring to. :)
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Postby gleff on Wed Sep 28, 2005 7:18 pm

I actually like it the way it is. Not sure why, I think it's the perspective.. Had I done it myself, I probably would have ruined it by just taking the walkway. Adding the wall just makes it better imho.

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Postby stubbsy on Wed Sep 28, 2005 7:20 pm

Gee guys. Personally I find it hard to be sure since I never look at the wall :lol:
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Postby Kris on Wed Sep 28, 2005 8:18 pm

Geoff, thanks :D Glad someone likes it - im going to play with it in photostop when I get home...
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Postby DionM on Wed Sep 28, 2005 10:15 pm

Yes, you are right. There is something about it, just not sure 'what'.

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Postby Mj on Wed Sep 28, 2005 11:23 pm

Personally I like the brick wall prominant in the shot... not sure why... guess I'm just bias that way... :lol: :lol: :lol:
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