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Postby camrak on Wed Sep 28, 2005 12:49 pm

Hi everybody!
I'm back, this is my second post :arrow: more photos is coming!
Comments and critique appreciated :)

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1. Last tower...



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2. King return...

All above photos been taken in Cracow (Poland).
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Postby Raskill on Wed Sep 28, 2005 12:53 pm

Nice, real nice :D

Like the first one the best. The second one appears too busy in the foreground, but thats only my opinion. Looking forward to seeing what else you post.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Sep 28, 2005 12:55 pm

Great stuff, I really find both your shots very appealing. The silhouette of the thorns greats a really nice affect, reminds me of barb wire or tiger wire, and kind of says to me the tower is off limits.

I like number two as well, but I think the crop is a little close, that or there is too much fence in the bottom half. For me it doesn't quiet feel balanced.
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Postby DStrom on Wed Sep 28, 2005 1:04 pm

camrak,

great shots, keep em coming!
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Postby wendellt on Wed Sep 28, 2005 1:17 pm

Very crafty choice of differential focus in shots
but number one is a more intimate view and sits the best with me.
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Postby krpolak on Wed Sep 28, 2005 2:00 pm

Camrac,

Those photos are sugar on my heart :)

Also well handled lighting and colour. My only critique would be perspective. Someting less leaning toward right side would be better (?).

And just though, propably it is not possible at all, but 'combining' two photos - king and rose stings could bring intresting methaphor for today ;)

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Postby camrak on Thu Sep 29, 2005 11:41 pm

Thanks for everyone opinion!
krpolak, glad you like them, i love these colours and shapes :)
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Postby Oneputt on Fri Sep 30, 2005 8:29 am

All I can see is little red crosses :wink:
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Postby mitedo on Fri Sep 30, 2005 8:41 am

Nice work #2 does it for me well done
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Postby Oneputt on Fri Sep 30, 2005 9:00 am

Aha - now I can see them :?
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Postby camrak on Fri Sep 30, 2005 5:37 pm

Thanks again :)
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