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Postby big pix on Sun Oct 02, 2005 12:38 am

A street musician in Portobello Road.........

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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Oct 02, 2005 12:41 am

Nice pic bp and the question - was his playing OK :wink:
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Oct 02, 2005 10:41 am

When i first looked at this image all i could see was the very top of the picture. It was all B&W and i thought i was looking at a photo from the 60's. Then when i scrolled down and saw the rest of the photo i realised it is recent. Interesting what my mind and memory can do to me :)

I really love this shot. I wish i had taken it.

Although i do like the colour bit and your look on it, i would have preferred to see it all B&W. That's my preference for a shot like this.

It is an image i have seen in my mind some time previously and i think you have captured a wonderful moment of time there.
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Postby big pix on Sun Oct 02, 2005 5:51 pm

Thanks Chris and Steve........Chris I think he was only fiddling.....

Steve after I read your comments I had another look through the series on this street performer and I think think this is an overall better Pix, I have also reduced the contrast with this second image, not sure if it helps or not......... I have done the converson using ACR to process to B&W from the RAW image..........method: set saturation slider to -100 and use the other sliders to ajust your B&W image as you would with colour, very easy, quick, and great control.........

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Postby Manta on Sun Oct 02, 2005 6:01 pm

I like them both Bernie but have to admit to a preference for the second one. The softer contrast is more inviting and the consistent tone across the image lets the viewer wander around more as opposed to being led to a particular spot within the shot.
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Postby moggy on Sun Oct 02, 2005 6:21 pm

I thought #1 was good but on seeing #2 I think all black and white is better. Nice shot Bernie. :wink:

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Postby Alex on Sun Oct 02, 2005 6:48 pm

I also prefer the B&W version. Great shot.

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Postby DionM on Sun Oct 02, 2005 7:03 pm

Love the mood of the BW shot.

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Postby stubbsy on Sun Oct 02, 2005 9:27 pm

Bernie. The full B & W has the old feel Steve refers to and is markedly better. These images are strong enough on their own without resorting to cliched colourised tricks to hook the viewer
:wink: (please note this is not a criticism since I have done the same in the past and will no doubt do so in the future).

At the risk of having a foot in both camps, I still think #1 is the better shot, just needs to be all B & W. Reason I think it's better is the greater feeling of irrelevance that the passersby have to me as a viewer and to the performer. In the second shot I keep noticing the lady with the hand to her head and the man on RHS with the plastic bag. The eye is an amazing thing.
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Oct 02, 2005 9:29 pm

I am with the others on the full B&W image :D
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Postby Slider on Sun Oct 02, 2005 9:50 pm

Great Shot Bernie. I do like the B&W version but must say the selective colour in the 1st presentation is very clever and effective. Very nice.
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Postby Manta on Sun Oct 02, 2005 10:07 pm

You've sold out, BP. Closer inspection of both shots reveal the subtle hints of your Nike sponsorship. :wink: :D
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Oct 02, 2005 10:10 pm

Actually, i like both of them as they are great shots in their own right. I really like the crowd walking passed the fiddler. My initial focus is on the fiddler, but as i look longer at the image, i see so much more than just a shot of an old bloke with a violin.

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Postby big pix on Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:52 pm

thankyou all ..........I thought you would like to see the colour shot.......

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Postby jethro on Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:54 pm

I love raw candid stuff, it makes a scene.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Oct 03, 2005 7:55 pm

Bernie - colour shot shows your wisdom. B & W is much better treatment. PS went to Tyrrell's today - the '05 whites are fantastic (best vintage I've tried for about 4 years or so). Flash says hi.
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Oct 03, 2005 7:59 pm

This may be old news Bernie but I see you are now using the D70s :wink:
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Postby big pix on Mon Oct 03, 2005 8:05 pm

sirhc55 wrote:This may be old news Bernie but I see you are now using the D70s :wink:


"YES" ...... my D70 has got the BGLOD or just did not like being on holidays........my son picked up the D70s body from B&H in New York for me while he was on a business trip to the US........I have only had it out shooting a few times as we have been quite busy......
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