An Intimate Session With A

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An Intimate Session With A

Postby mic on Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:04 am

Tulip :lol:

Had a Macro session with a vase of Tulips my wife brought home, there are a few so this is the 1st of them that I will be showing over the week ahead.
Yes, everybody will be bored of Tulips once I finish :roll:

This one was shot with my Micro Nikkor 105mm @ F: 22 / 10 Secs under Tungsten Light ( Hence the name )

I hope you enjoy my passionate experience with my Tulips around Midnight on a Saturday night :roll: :roll: I have to get out more I think.

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Postby PiroStitch on Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:12 am

Being intimate with a tulip? I'm not sure about this fetish of yours Mic :P I hope your wife understood why you were up at midnight with a flower instead of her :lol:

Great pic nevertheless and love the effect and contrast the water droplets bring out in the tulip.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:14 am

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You've got bloody good haven't you. Love the detail on this and your (new) trademark black background. I can't wait for the rest in the series.
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Postby KerryPierce on Mon Oct 03, 2005 12:52 am

Mic the flower child. :shock: :lol:

Nicely done, Mic. It's a very cool shot. :D
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Postby hangdog on Mon Oct 03, 2005 1:20 am

Damn, what a knockout photo! Beautifully done.

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Postby rokkstar on Mon Oct 03, 2005 10:28 am

Excellent.
Very nice shot - love the water drops
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Postby Killakoala on Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:00 am

Beautifully produced. I can see where the intimacy comes from. :)
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Postby kipper on Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:07 am

This is a great photo Mic but I'm sure you could take it one step further.
I would have liked to have seen this with out the distracting leaves/foliage/sepal on the bottom left. Would also have liked to have seen the receptacle (the green bit were the petals join the stem) of the tulip and maybe a bit more centered.

They're my only nits, the rest is spot on. Great colors, llighting, exposure and the water droplets add a nice touch.
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:35 am

Beautiful - and thank God it’s not the ”i” word :wink:
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Postby mic on Mon Oct 03, 2005 4:20 pm

Thanks Wayne, :wink: Yes, the Wifey was asking the same thing :roll:

Thanks Stubbsy, :wink: I am pretty happy how this turned out.

Thanks Kerry, FLOWER POWER :shock: I have to find something different to shoot :roll:

Thanks hangdog, :wink:

Thanks rockstar, :wink: Always keep a spray bottle in the laundry I say :D

Thanks Killa, :wink: Glad to know I'm not completly Bonkers :roll:

Thanks Kipper, :wink: I left the other bits in to make it different & off centre as well, I do agree I could have got a bit of the stem in though.

Thanks Chris, :wink: I think I have grown and moved on from the inverting stage unless I come across something that it does work on that is.

Cheers all, stay tuned for more Tulipa coming your way.

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Postby stubbsy on Mon Oct 03, 2005 5:21 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Beautiful - and thank God it’s not the ”i” word :wink:

Sad confession to make. Took me a while to work out what the "i" word was until I saw mic's reply :oops:
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Postby mic on Mon Oct 03, 2005 5:55 pm

And Another.

Pinkus Tulipa

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Postby big pix on Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:06 pm

very well done mic....... you have come a long way in a short time ....... your creative side has bloomed..........
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Postby jethro on Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:12 pm

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It has to be a horny type thing you are now phasing into. correct me or not.
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Oct 03, 2005 6:40 pm

mic

The second shot is less striking to me. The RHS is beautifully done, but the image is let down by the large OOF area on the LHS - a problem with the shallow DOF you're playing with :cry:
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Postby mic on Mon Oct 03, 2005 10:52 pm

Thanks bp, :wink: Very Blooming of ya :lol:

Thanks Jethro, :wink: Yes, very Horny time for me :lol: I just have to keep it going with the idea's & get out of Flowers I think, thanks for the Pats on the back mate.

Fair enough Stubbsy, :wink: I tend to agree with you, maybe you might like this one a bit better ?

Thanks all,

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Postby mic on Mon Oct 03, 2005 11:36 pm

And this one

Within Tulipa

I didn't focus on the Stamin on purpose, this one looks better than the focused Stamin one does with the pattern in the background.

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Postby stubbsy on Tue Oct 04, 2005 11:39 am

Mic

Rising pink is a little drab - probably a combo of the dark image and the pale tulip, but nice & sharp. Last one is interesting, but just misses the mark somehow

Oh and it's stamen
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