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by NikonUser on Tue Oct 04, 2005 6:51 pm
Hi there,
Didn't have a very good day with shooting insects today so I thought I'd go and edit some of my older RAW images for something to do...
I recently got Fred Miranda's 'Digital Velvia' action for photoshop... Do you think this is overdone?
My original image:
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by Nnnnsic on Tue Oct 04, 2005 6:53 pm
I'd say half and half.
I like the saturation in the ground / background, but the tiger looks more like a fuzzy tiger toy and less like a tiger.
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by Geoff on Tue Oct 04, 2005 6:59 pm
I prefer the original 
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by mitedo on Tue Oct 04, 2005 7:00 pm
Just a little my settings are
Intensity 14%
Contrast 2
Smart Col none
No Neutralize
No Warm Col
Dynamic Range level 2
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by MCWB on Tue Oct 04, 2005 7:20 pm
Nnnnsic wrote:I'd say half and half.
I like the saturation in the ground / background, but the tiger looks more like a fuzzy tiger toy and less like a tiger.
Haha wow, I'm the opposite! I actually like the tiger more now, but find the increased saturation in the background more of a distraction. YMMV. 
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by MattC on Tue Oct 04, 2005 7:30 pm
I find it a little too much. Maybe somewhere in between.
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by Alpha_7 on Tue Oct 04, 2005 7:55 pm
I like the first one, I like the tiger and the background (just to be different).
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by Willy wombat on Tue Oct 04, 2005 7:58 pm
A little too saturated but i think it has a lot of potential. Can you tone it down a little bit? Especially on the two front paws.
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by mudder on Tue Oct 04, 2005 8:06 pm
G'day Paul,
The extra sat might be a touch strong for me, especially as the whiskers seem to be going purple and the background is a smidge distracting for me... Hmm I think his tail must be cold too, I think it's going a bit blue  There seems a hint of these colours in the original though.
Maybe if the extra sat was just on the tiger, and perhaps darken the background stuff a smidge so the focus is more centred on the pussy-cat? Might also consider cropping out the tree trunk (if that's what it is?) that's protruding into the right of frame maybe?
Great shot by the way!
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by NikonUser on Tue Oct 04, 2005 8:09 pm
Seems like most think it's a little overdone
Thanks for the suggestions... will give them a go when I get a chance
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by marcotrov on Tue Oct 04, 2005 8:12 pm
I'm with mattC paul somewhere in between would have been more effective for me. It's always such a subjective thing though. Nice capture maybe having the tiger look straight down the barrel could have produced more impact. I am also thinking that the original with just a little tweak of the curves to get that gentle 's' bend just to get a little 'pop' in contrast and bring it to life.
But hell what do I know!
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by PiroStitch on Tue Oct 04, 2005 8:58 pm
Too saturated for me. I prefer the original because the less saturated look suits the border more.
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by jethro on Tue Oct 04, 2005 9:00 pm
Half and half dont mind both
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by Matt. K on Tue Oct 04, 2005 9:07 pm
I find even the original a liitle too over-saturated. This image might look better B&W?
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by nito on Tue Oct 04, 2005 9:32 pm
I have a bias towards saturation and colour. But, the PP version is a bit too saturated. If I was to give a figure, maybe a 20% reduction would be cool. 
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by Potatis on Tue Oct 04, 2005 10:16 pm
Paul I use that plug-in all the time. I find it does funny things to yellow and greens, they come up too bright. So after making my images saturated like yours, I go into photoshop>image>adjustments>selective color and choose "yellow" and play around with things there. Especially the magenta slidy thing, I move it to the right, and adjust the others a little too. That seems to correct the yellows and bright greens. Adding the dynamic range and a little contrast with that plugin usually improves the image a lot, you can see when you go back and look how it was in the history pane. Try playing with the yellow channel in images>adjustments>selective color and see what you can learn there.
Can I suggest Cyan +21, Magenta +6, Yellow - 48, and black +5, in the yellow channel?
Then choose the "Neutrals" channel, set cyan to -9, magenta -9, yellow -10 and black +10. You should then have an image of vivid colours, but not garish. You can try reducing shadows and adding a bit of contrast.
Or adjust the levels how you like, just experiment. But Fred's plugin is a good start to get a better dynamic range.
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