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Postby dk on Sat Dec 10, 2005 1:59 am

Here is an image I captured during a snow storm in central Utah. This is my first attempt at b&w. The print turned out lovely and I have had many favorable comments and requests to purchase. I shot this with my D70 w/18-70mm at 38mm focal length, 1/125 sec. f/8 ISO400 TTL +1.0 EV. I wanted to get a bit overexposed and do some pp with PictureProject. I enhanced the brightness level to get the level of contrast I was looking for. Question: Since I have had so many ask me to sell them signed copies, what should I charge as a limited edition print with a print limit of say 200? Also, your comments on how I could do better in the future are most welcomed.

Thanks a million.

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Postby Alpha_7 on Sat Dec 10, 2005 6:02 am

Nice Black and White conversion, while I like the effect you've acheived with the over exposure, its almost too stark for me (but that could just be my LCD). I have no experience with making prints, or selling them, but I'm sure a number of the members can help you out on that front.
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Postby Onyx on Sat Dec 10, 2005 11:22 am

It's an interesting fine art print IMO. Good heavy contrast, a snowstorm is clearly black and white with not much inbetweeen greys, and you've portrayed that well.

I was more awestruck by the other images in that collection - the beautiful LDS temples from all around UT. I take it you were comissioned by the church to shoot those?!
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Postby dk on Tue Jan 17, 2006 3:10 am

Sorry for the delay in responding to these post.

Thanks for the comments too. I really enjoy black and white but I need a better editing program to make the conversion a true b&w.

The shots I did of the LDS Temples (although I placed them in the commissioned gallery) were taken for my pleasure.

Thanks again.

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Postby marcotrov on Tue Jan 17, 2006 8:27 am

A very artistic feel to this high key image. I like it :)
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Postby Alex on Tue Jan 17, 2006 9:04 am

Hi dk,

This is a very nice image. I like the B&W conversion.

Well done
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Postby Sheila Smart on Tue Jan 17, 2006 9:32 am

Brrrr.... I can almost feel that temperature :lol: Regarding charging, it would of course depend on the size of the print. Its difficult to say as you are in the US where the prices are a tad different. Are you going to print it yourself or outsource it? Are you going to matboard them too. If so, I would shop around for matboards. Seek out a framing company rather than buying matboards in stores as you can normally get a good deal this way. A rule of thumb I read somewhere is to multiply your costs by four. This works fairly well.

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Postby dk on Tue Jan 17, 2006 10:06 am

Thank you all for taking the time to share your thoughts.

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Postby big pix on Tue Jan 17, 2006 10:31 am

a nice image.......but high key images need not lack detail and I feel that a lot of detail has been lost in this conversion, with a bit more time spent on pp I am sure it can be made into a fantastic image as all the pieces are there........
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