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Lone Guitarist

Postby sirhc55 on Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:50 am

Through the door darkly, he plays his lonely music.

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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:54 am

Wow Chris, Wow!

Took a while to load, and I was wondering what i'd see.... don't think I've seen too many shots posted here with this kind of style and what I might try to term 'art processing' its really something else. I'd love a few details on how you acheive the affects you have in this shot, as it's masterfully done. I found the ceiling light a little distracting till I identified it, but I really like this.. its something very different.. please provide more information behind the shot, whole the musician is.. where it was shot.
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Postby big pix on Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:55 am

great ....... shows a lot of feeling and mood.......the effect is good and works very well with the image.........but I know that the door way is important to the overall feeling of the image but for me there is a bit too much black at the bottom of the shot which I find a bit of a distraction from the overall feel of a great image........ maybe a slight crop from the bottom
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Postby Sheila Smart on Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:56 am

I really like this image. The fact that you cannot see his face adds the mystery (and tension) to the image. Nice work.

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Postby Geoff on Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:57 am

Chris,
Another fine example of your skills as a photographer. You can really feel the mood of this image. I agree that a slight crop from the bottom would enhance it a little. Well done, I like this a lot! :)
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Jan 15, 2006 11:01 am

Thanks Craig - shot with a Nikkormat FTn on Kodachrome circa 1969. The person in the shot was my best buddy who I have not seen in over 33 years. Shot in his bedsit in Hammersmith, London.

Scanned and then pp’ed with levels and a colour sepia fade added via a Nik filter. I also decreased noise and added a level of despeckle. :)
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Postby Alex on Sun Jan 15, 2006 11:10 am

Excellent, mysteriously looking image. I love it.

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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Jan 15, 2006 11:10 am

I thought about cropping the bottom but I wanted a long lead in to the subject to emphasis the loneliness 8)

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Postby Potatis on Sun Jan 15, 2006 12:10 pm

Ooh.. I like this. It's interesting to see what things looked like WAY before I was BORN! :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby LittleB on Sun Jan 15, 2006 12:10 pm

Chris, this is EXCELLENT! I like the sepia colours you used in the pp, really sets the mood. :D :D
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Postby marcotrov on Sun Jan 15, 2006 12:23 pm

What a terrific and artistic image Chris love its emmotive quality. Under normal circumstances I'd crop the darkness from the bottom, and though it looks good doing that as well, I think the darkness top and bottom of frame create a balance that adds to the image's impact. Great shot :)
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Jan 15, 2006 3:05 pm

Potatis wrote:Ooh.. I like this. It's interesting to see what things looked like WAY before I was BORN! :lol: :lol: :lol:


You young thang you :lol: Yes, everything was in pastels and out of focus back then :lol: :lol:
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Postby LostDingo on Sun Jan 15, 2006 3:11 pm

sirhc55 wrote:
Potatis wrote:Ooh.. I like this. It's interesting to see what things looked like WAY before I was BORN! :lol: :lol: :lol:


You young thang you :lol: Yes, everything was in pastels and out of focus back then :lol: :lol:


The world was not in color until after color TV :shock:

Chris, I wouldn't crop, I think if this were mounted you would regret chopping off the bottom. Good work of the "hand colored" look :!:
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Postby Oneputt on Sun Jan 15, 2006 3:32 pm

Very nice Chris. There is something almost Whilstler'ish about it. :D
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Postby stubbsy on Sun Jan 15, 2006 5:32 pm

Chris. This image is perfect and a testament to your skills. Seeing work of this quality from you taken 35 + years ago explains a lot about the high quality of what you do now. In 35 years time I'll be too old to even take a photo (if I'm still walking) :cry:
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Postby owen on Sun Jan 15, 2006 6:03 pm

Great moody shot Chris. The colour and tonality really suit the style of shot.
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Postby xerubus on Sun Jan 15, 2006 7:54 pm

great shot and very good processing.. suits the subject very well.

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Postby Sandy Feet on Tue Jan 17, 2006 11:52 am

I love the lighting in this shot its an excellent image

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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jan 17, 2006 12:53 pm

Thanks to everyone - this shot proves that sometimes you can get something out of a shot that was initially due to be binned :wink:
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Postby wendellt on Tue Jan 17, 2006 12:56 pm

excellent composition and mood, the colour tone is gorgeous. Do i detect the subtle use of smart blur on this image?
what is it exactly somone in his room playing a guitar or a guitarist in his studio?
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Postby rokkstar on Tue Jan 17, 2006 12:59 pm

The colour on this shot is great Chris. Lovely and soft. Great leading lines to the guitar player too. Nice
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jan 17, 2006 1:01 pm

An old friend Wendell from years ago trying his hand at learning the guitar. There were a few treatments on this including (I now remember) duplex colour from the Nik filter set.
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Postby Collingwood on Tue Jan 17, 2006 3:39 pm

Mighty fine pic!
As for the cropping, if it were me personally, I would take just a fraction from the bottom where the last detail on the left side of the doorway can be seen but no biggie either way.
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