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Saviour

Postby Nnnnsic on Mon Jan 16, 2006 12:20 am

I'm sure it's someones saviour.

It's not mine, but I still like this picture from today that I felt deserved to be separate from my other images.

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Postby Onyx on Mon Jan 16, 2006 12:28 am

Jesus was a knee-grow, I knew it!
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Postby Geoff on Mon Jan 16, 2006 7:17 am

Nice work Leigh.
I like the DOF u've used in this image too.
Any more??? :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jan 16, 2006 9:31 am

I like this shot, but I'm still wondering as I was when I first view this was the grey stuff in the arches shadow to the right of Jesus is ?
I can't work it out so I need some help.

Just quietly, it looks like this Jesus should of taken a second or third helping at the last supper, he's way to skinny.
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Postby xerubus on Mon Jan 16, 2006 9:34 am

Leigh.. interesting shot....

perhaps clone out some of the 'out-of-place' grey matter in the bottom right hand corner and a little bit of a crop so that it's not smack in the middle?

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Postby marcotrov on Mon Jan 16, 2006 9:38 am

Nicely done image that really gets the attention on the crucifix but i'm with Xerubus re- cloning out the distracting grey matter to the right in the shadows. Unless of course it's the Holy Ghost coming over for a visit :lol:
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Postby Nnnnsic on Mon Jan 16, 2006 11:41 am

Ah. Bloody lack of light in my room.

I see it now that it didn't go completely to black.
Damnit.

Will go and fix now.

'Twas an overly bright highlight of a window which didn't work with the cross.
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Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jan 16, 2006 11:45 am

Glad we help you out, on my darker CRT its less noticeable but on the LCD it stuck out quiet badly.
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Postby Nnnnsic on Mon Jan 16, 2006 11:55 am

Ok. Image fixed.

I really need to replace that 2 year old broken lightbulb. :lol:
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Postby xerubus on Mon Jan 16, 2006 11:56 am

much better... ;)
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Postby MCWB on Mon Jan 16, 2006 12:02 pm

xerubus wrote:perhaps clone out some of the 'out-of-place' grey matter

If that was intentional, good work. :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :lol:
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Postby stubbsy on Mon Jan 16, 2006 12:08 pm

Leigh

This looks even better than it did when I saw the unprocessed version. I would however like to join the clone chorus. :lol:
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Postby wendellt on Mon Jan 16, 2006 12:45 pm

Nice DOF elements and colours
very different to your other work should make a good addition to your breakfast portfolio
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