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On the topic of Dad's
Viewing Craig's recent shots of his Dad it inspired me to take this candid of my Dad early this morning..Comments welcomed as always:
Geoff
Special Moments Photography Nikon D700, 50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.4, 70-200 2.8VR, SB800 & some simple studio stuff.
I saw this while I was at Stubbsy\'s.
Great image and nice black and white but the composition seems a tad tight on the right side. Perhaps a slightly different crop? Posted from a Sony Ericsson mobile phone
Can't see the image geoff, sorry
 I can see it now. Nice image geoff I like the eye contact you've managed to achieve, lighting is good and B7W was a good choice, it speaks volumes:)
cheers marco Last edited by marcotrov on Sun Jan 15, 2006 4:33 pm, edited 1 time in total.
I agree with Leigh that a different - tighter - crop would help an already good image, Geoff.
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Gary Stark Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
On the topic of Dad's what???
Seriously though... I like the shot but would probably be tempted to crop it to a square format - thereby removing the pen in his pocket and some of the space at the top... The resemblance is uncanny BTW... Cheers, John
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Thanx Wally, but please note my name is spelt GEOFF . Geoff
Special Moments Photography Nikon D700, 50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.4, 70-200 2.8VR, SB800 & some simple studio stuff.
Like the B&W and love the eye contact, while I don't mind the crop I'd like to see a different crop to compare it against perhaps the square John suggested ?
What does your dad think of the image Geoff? I like the eye contact too but I find the window on the right a little distracting. I don't find the pen in the pocket a problem, in fact, I think it gives a little bit of information about your dad. (If only that he likes pens in his pocket!)
Nikon D7000
sorry Geoff - I have a frend called jeff so its a habit  Where am I
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