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Postby admajic on Wed Jun 07, 2006 11:39 pm

Here is one of a flower I shot whilst at the Botanical Gardens on Sat.
C & C pls.

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Interested to see what u think of the crop as well.
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Postby optogamut on Thu Jun 08, 2006 12:30 am

I always have issues like this, I get all focused on the flower and don't notice things like the crap all over the nearby leaves, it's a bit distracting here.

I think you also need to get more of the flower or you could crop a bit more off the bottom, as there seems to be to much blurry foreground.

Interesting flower, just those couple of things holding it back for me.
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Postby greencardigan on Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:19 pm

I agree that the surroundings are a bit distracting especially the bright leaves up the top.

Otherwise a nice pic.
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