Château de Chambord

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Château de Chambord

Postby wendellt on Thu Jun 08, 2006 7:34 pm

finally got a chance to ravage my hard disk and find my loire valley pics from france taken in january

my memory is cloudy but form the pics it seems the weather was great for winter

this is Château de Chambord
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the morning light was gorgeous. 12-24dx + CPL

i was lucky enough to get some fog which makes this scene all the more romantic and nostalgic
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on the roof
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inside was colder than outside
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Postby Nnnnsic on Thu Jun 08, 2006 7:39 pm

I'd say that your fourth is the best out of those lot.
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Postby MCWB on Thu Jun 08, 2006 7:40 pm

Quality Wendell! :up:
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Postby blacknstormy on Thu Jun 08, 2006 7:41 pm

Beautiful Wendell - I think I'd prefer the second cropped into a portrait though ..... just a thought :)
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Postby Glen on Thu Jun 08, 2006 7:43 pm

Very nice Wendell
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Postby owen on Thu Jun 08, 2006 7:47 pm

The first is probably my favourite. Lovely wide country looking scene.

The fourth one is also really good.
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Jun 08, 2006 7:51 pm

Wendell #2 and #4 for me (4 is best). #1 the tree branches distract me from the image too much
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Postby glamy on Thu Jun 08, 2006 8:59 pm

Went there last year as well in May. You did capture it well.
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Jun 08, 2006 9:04 pm

Wendell - what can I say - #1 and #2 are just superb. I have decided that to improve my photography to your standard, I am going to start breaking some equipment :lol:
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Postby glamy on Thu Jun 08, 2006 9:09 pm

Here is one of mine
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Nice spring weather :roll: .
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Postby Jeko70 on Thu Jun 08, 2006 9:14 pm

Hi Wendell,

#2, #4 are lovely, the #4 looksmore attractive to me!
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Postby mudder on Thu Jun 08, 2006 9:28 pm

Some great images there, particularly like the foggy outlook in #2 (I'm also thinking of a crop but maybe square?) but my favorite would have to be #4, I just love the long shadows...
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Postby marcotrov on Thu Jun 08, 2006 9:36 pm

Some great images here Wendell. My picks are #1(i think the branches tend to frame the image and contain the eyes within the image) #3 (lovely perspective that accentuates the architectural qualities) and

#4 -the shadowsand doorway light make this image. I would however suggest that a tighter crop (to juat shave off the ass of the figure bending over and include the window light) around the main subject, couple walking through main doorway, would focus the eyes on that point of interest and effectively remove the figure/s moving out of frame on far left side. I would even go so far to say a severe crop say to the column supporting the main doorway so that the columns width now defines the left hand edge of frame(its a big crop but D2X file can handle that :) ). You would then have the main sadow framed by the doorway light leading the eye to the portal and subjects. IMO it would make for a stronger composition in what already is a lovely image. Hope this makes sense wendell :)
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Postby stormygirl on Thu Jun 08, 2006 9:59 pm

Geeze Wendell, you really know how to give a person itchy feet :roll:

Love them all, such atmosphere. Great stuff! Just wish I had my DSLR when I went overseas last......
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Postby Alex on Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:02 pm

Wendell,
No 1 and 2 are excellent. Great work.

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Postby sheepie on Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:07 pm

I feel this is where your true calling as a photographer is Wendell - you are wasted in fashion, get out there and make images of the world!

Nicely done, especially the last :)
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Postby kazuhiro on Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:21 pm

Those shots are brilliant!
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Postby wendellt on Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:55 pm

thankyou everyone for the compliments

andrew here is a square version, it's very cute

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Rel a portrait for you, that day i remember the frost forming on my face as looked endlessly over that exquisite view.

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Marco is this bettter, it's more dramatic
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or portrait?
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fab and Gerard your lucky you visit europe on a regular basis lots of photographic opportunites everywhere. Gerard it was cold and on the same day it snowed but the morning light was just purrrfect.

chris your funny, but in all honesty when something half works you tend to improvise a little more.

thanks leigh i like number 4 as well, it has more dimension than the others

and sheepie thanks for the compliment i'd like to think i can do both
or at the very least merge my 2 passions travel and fashion

this makes me want to go through more images the memories are starting to come back.
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Postby Jeko70 on Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:59 pm

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Postby ghost on Fri Jun 09, 2006 12:29 am

WOW :shock: :shock: I am humbled yet again.
1 & 2 do it for me. Excellent work.
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Postby admajic on Fri Jun 09, 2006 12:31 am

Good work Wendell!!
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Postby Yi-P on Fri Jun 09, 2006 1:47 am

I love #1, will be perfect without the little tree branches up top :)
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Postby rooboy on Fri Jun 09, 2006 8:18 am

Great work Wendell. The square crop works well for me :)
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Postby ABG on Fri Jun 09, 2006 11:02 am

Sensational Wendell. First class images.
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Postby PiroStitch on Fri Jun 09, 2006 11:10 am

1, 2 and 4 for me.

1 - Branches are distracting but I guess it goes with the territory. I think the most captivating thing about the image is the colour. It's what hit me first.

2 - Love the original but the quarter of the tree on the left needs to be cropped out. Otherwise it's perfect

4 - Nice and moody and well captured.
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