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Postby MATT on Sat Jan 15, 2005 2:02 pm

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And she's only 14months old.

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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Jan 15, 2005 2:05 pm

Matt - your D70 needs a cleaner built-in.

:cry:

Your pic needs a bit of PP - lighten and contrast

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Postby JordanP on Sat Jan 15, 2005 2:09 pm

Arrr, the ethical question...... to clean or to get the shot?

Matt, after much deliberation, I think you made the right decision

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Postby MATT on Sat Jan 15, 2005 2:26 pm

I just hope the wife does not see the pic, I was supposed to be looking after her!!!

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Hope you don't mind MATT

Postby beetleboy on Sat Jan 15, 2005 2:49 pm

I hope you don't mind MATT but I followed Chris' lead:

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A quick Levels adjustment (plus WB) and 2 USMs (one to boost contrast and one to sharpen).

Email me if you want me to take this down! Hope I haven't stood on your toes!

Liam =] PS - I've compressed this quite heavily to save space on my server!
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Postby MATT on Sat Jan 15, 2005 3:39 pm

No probs Beetle,

Its good to see sometimes what people can do.

I tried a little lighning and contrast but wasn't happy with the results.

I'll try again.

Question what is USM??

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Postby PlatinumWeaver on Sat Jan 15, 2005 3:41 pm

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Postby digitor on Sat Jan 15, 2005 4:04 pm

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Postby digitor on Sat Jan 15, 2005 4:06 pm

Edit to remove duplicate posts - I got a couple of "Invalid Response" errors, and bing, I'd submitted three identical posts!

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Postby digitor on Sat Jan 15, 2005 4:08 pm

A slightly softer approach:

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The best thing about PP is that you can try lots of different looks, until you find one that suits you. Or that could be the worst thing, for slightly indecisive people like me... Then again, I'm not sure.

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Postby MATT on Sat Jan 15, 2005 4:28 pm

What steps did you use Digitor?


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Postby Raydar on Sat Jan 15, 2005 5:06 pm

Arrr this I have seen many times myself.
Great image matt, this brings back memories, but then again nothing much has changed depending on what we have for tea it still get like this!!!!! :shock:

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Postby sirhc55 on Sat Jan 15, 2005 5:23 pm

Nice digitor - a nice pic has become a great pic with the PP - emotive plus technical :wink:

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Hmm

Postby beetleboy on Sat Jan 15, 2005 5:42 pm

Hmmm..methinks I went a little overboard!

I used my homemade contrast boosting Action and have inadverntently killed the skin tones and blown the whites! Just pressed F3 and thought; that looks better!

Liam =]

Note to self: don't watch TV while PP'ing!
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Postby digitor on Sat Jan 15, 2005 6:17 pm

MATT wrote:What steps did you use Digitor?

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Levels, very slight curve tweak at the bottom end, slight local contrast boost around the face using the usm filter, (can't remember the exact numbers, but something like 30-25-3), photo filter #81 @ about 20%, and usm I think about 100-0.5-1.

Sounds complicated when you write it down, but it took longer to type than do!

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Postby bago100 on Sat Jan 15, 2005 10:17 pm

Matt

Great photograph! In years to come, you'll get lots of laughs reminding your daughter about the time when (fill in the blanks). Could be worth sending that one to Hardley Normal for printing.

Now, if she were my daughter, I'd be turning the lawn sprinkler on and encouraging her to have a crawl on the lawn! :D all before mummy comes home of course.

Also a dishwasher is handy for cups and spoons. Might need to hire a Karcher to clean the high chair though.

Well done

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Postby lejazzcat on Sun Jan 16, 2005 1:29 am

sirhc55 wrote:Nice digitor - a nice pic has become a great pic with the PP - emotive plus technical :wink:

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