Mikhails bike, version 3, Bobbin Head

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Mikhails bike, version 3, Bobbin Head

Postby Matt. K on Tue Jan 25, 2005 10:49 pm

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Postby leek on Tue Jan 25, 2005 10:56 pm

the best so far... I'm guessing that the background is a small selection from the main photo expanded and manipulated... just under the saddle???
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Postby stubbsy on Tue Jan 25, 2005 10:59 pm

Matt.

Best of the bunch. I wish I had your PS skills (now)

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Postby Hlop on Wed Jan 26, 2005 7:00 am

Hi Matt,

I completely agree with previous posts - this is my favorite version!

Maybe you have to do something with the stand - it "hangs" in the air.

Thank you for your work on my bike :)
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Postby birddog114 on Wed Jan 26, 2005 7:01 am

Hlop wrote:Hi Matt,

I completely agree with previous posts - this is my favorite version!

Maybe you have to do something with the stand - it "hangs" in the air.

Thank you for your work on my bike :)


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Postby Hlop on Wed Jan 26, 2005 7:04 am

Birddog114 wrote:
Hilop,
Have you seen the bill yet? :lol:


You're frightening me ..... :)
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Postby birddog114 on Wed Jan 26, 2005 7:06 am

Hlop wrote:
Birddog114 wrote:
Hilop,
Have you seen the bill yet? :lol:


You're frightening me ..... :)


You don't know Matt, don't you? a cut throat bike repairer :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby gstark on Wed Jan 26, 2005 7:53 am

Matt,

I'm in violent agreement with the others; this is the best of the bunch.

This background complements the colouring of the bike, but at the same time, to me it has an almost fairground/merry-go-round kind of feel. well done.
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Postby Raydar on Wed Jan 26, 2005 8:11 am

Matt this one I like!!!! 8)

What selection proses do you use for your fine detailed stuff mate?
Or have you got your hands on one of those plugin’s that are about on the net???? :?

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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Jan 26, 2005 8:56 am

I go with the clouds - makes the bike forceful without interferring in any way with its shape.

I find with the others (except the building) that the design somehow interacts with the main subject in a way that is intrusive to the form and flow of the bike which should be the focus of attention.

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Postby birddog114 on Wed Jan 26, 2005 8:57 am

sirhc55 wrote:I go with the clouds - makes the bike forceful without interferring in any way with its shape.

I find with the others (except the building) that the design somehow interacts with the main subject in a way that is intrusive to the form and flow of the bike which should be the focus of attention.

Cheers

Chris


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Pls. don't ask Matt too much :lol: he'll make hilop's bike invisible and still snd him a bill :lol:
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Postby Matt. K on Wed Jan 26, 2005 11:17 am

Raydar
I use the pen tool and it has to be done manually. The pen tool is the only tool for this kind of work. Happy to demonstrate the subleties of the tool at a future meet. Took about 3/4 hour to make the selection. Of course...once selected then the bike is mine to put where I want or manipulate as I see fit.
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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Jan 26, 2005 11:38 am

Matt. K wrote:Raydar
I use the pen tool and it has to be done manually. The pen tool is the only tool for this kind of work. Happy to demonstrate the subleties of the tool at a future meet. Took about 3/4 hour to make the selection. Of course...once selected then the bike is mine to put where I want or manipulate as I see fit.


Hi Matt

The pen tool is my favourite in PS - I have deep etched so many products over the years and this has helped immensely in using the same tool in Illustrator.

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