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Postby nodabs on Fri Jan 28, 2005 3:15 am

here are a couple of pics from my excursion to the skatepark today

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questions and comments please :)
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Postby sirhc55 on Fri Jan 28, 2005 8:58 am

#1 is great - the black and white adds to this photo - the angle is great - I like.

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Postby MHD on Fri Jan 28, 2005 9:13 am

did you sharpen number 1?
I think it may be slightly oversharpened, I can see a halo....

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Postby mudder on Fri Jan 28, 2005 10:52 am

I like the B&W and the detail in wat would have been the shadow areas of the bike rider in #1 against the moody sky...

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Postby nodabs on Fri Jan 28, 2005 11:45 am

i think i sharpened number 1 but the halo is from PP that i need to do propery now i know what it's going to look like, basically i made another layer and cut the rider out of it (with some overflow whichy is the halo) then darkened the sky to bring out the cloud patterns abit more then converted to black and white so the halo is the lighter bottom layer showing through. wi will go back and do it pixel by pixel and get rid of the halo for printing and gallerisation
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Postby nodabs on Fri Jan 28, 2005 11:47 am

oo ps the best example of this is the jeans of number 2 where the halo is more like a special effect lol but thats my sloppy PP will redo
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