State Library - Lights or No Lights?

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State Library - Lights or No Lights?

Postby dviv on Thu Sep 27, 2007 12:31 pm

Took these last weekend and have been tossing up which one I prefer.

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Postby bwhinnen on Thu Sep 27, 2007 12:34 pm

Hmm, can I respond in a different way? I'd be tempted to crop out some of the foreground. The lights actually add to it more than not having them there, but I think a crop would work wonders.

It's a nice building though and I like the look between the trees :)
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Postby dviv on Thu Sep 27, 2007 1:58 pm

Thanks for the suggestion. A pano style crop:

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Postby Ant on Thu Sep 27, 2007 3:04 pm

Maybe even tighter, just below the fence... not sure that the lights add anything.

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Postby bwhinnen on Thu Sep 27, 2007 3:13 pm

Ant wrote:Maybe even tighter, just below the fence... not sure that the lights add anything.

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That was my thought. Also leave the top as it was, you'll still get a pano crop.
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