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Postby the foto fanatic on Fri Sep 28, 2007 10:37 am

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Postby bwhinnen on Fri Sep 28, 2007 11:00 am

Not sure on this one Trevor. I like it's simplicity but something is telling me that there is too much to this shot. I think it is the bottom LHS corner being a bit brighter than the rest of the image.

It is a nice looking time piece though!
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Postby Raskill on Fri Sep 28, 2007 11:10 am

I like it.

Simplicity, and it suits the black and white treatment.

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Postby sirhc55 on Fri Sep 28, 2007 1:44 pm

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Postby Matt. K on Fri Sep 28, 2007 3:12 pm

I had a water proof watch once. I never saw a drop of water come out of it! :? :? :?
Did you stop the watch for the shot? The second hand seems sharp ergo small f/stop = slow shutter normally blurrs the second hand.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Fri Sep 28, 2007 4:59 pm

Matt. K wrote:I had a water proof watch once. I never saw a drop of water come out of it! :? :? :?
Did you stop the watch for the shot? The second hand seems sharp ergo small f/stop = slow shutter normally blurrs the second hand.


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I guess the flash was able to stop time. :D
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Postby Matt. K on Fri Sep 28, 2007 6:49 pm

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Ah ha! A closer look would have told me that! thanks! You have controlled the reflections very well.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Fri Sep 28, 2007 7:07 pm

Matt. K wrote:Did you stop the watch for the shot? The second hand seems sharp ergo small f/stop = slow shutter normally blurrs the second hand.


I thought of another reason - one that Professor Julius Sumner Miller (were he still alive!) would be proud of.

This particular second hand is very small, so the end point is not moving as quickly as it would if the second hand reached right out to the edge of the dial as you sometimes see.
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Postby Steffen on Fri Sep 28, 2007 11:44 pm

I like the shot and the watch ;) When shooting watches you've got to be careful with the position of the hands, though. I bet this one would look much nicer at 23 past 7 or so, when the hour hand doesn't obscure the seconds dial.

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