Maximeet Portrait - Master and Model???

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Maximeet Portrait - Master and Model???

Postby sheepie on Sun Oct 14, 2007 10:16 am

While Gary was trying to get a good shot of Pa yesterday, I snapped this one which I quite like :)

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Postby Reschsmooth on Sun Oct 14, 2007 10:46 am

Leon - can't view the image.
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Postby sheepie on Sun Oct 14, 2007 11:46 am

should work now :)
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Postby gstark on Sun Oct 14, 2007 12:10 pm

Leon,

That's a truly great capture, despite the obvious problems wuth the subject matter. TBQH, it's one of the best images of me that I've aver seen. Must be because of the mushroom factor. :)

Of course the reality behind that image is that Leon was the one trying to get a good sillhouette style of image of Pa. I was just taking an occasional snap from the other side, and playing with the lights in order to <strike>hinder</strike>help Leon get the effect he was seeking. The upshot was that we really needed a big white sheep. I mean sheet, in order to get a truly blown background. As none was readily available, we abandoned that project and retired to the Chardonnay. :)
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Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Oct 14, 2007 1:33 pm

Nice Leon, I really like this shot, capturing a well know local photographer in his natural habitat.
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Postby Manta on Sun Oct 14, 2007 2:28 pm

Love it Leon - a very charismatic shot of both gents.
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Postby daniel_r on Sun Oct 14, 2007 4:08 pm

Great shot Leon :)

The rim light effect works well!
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Postby Matt. K on Sun Oct 14, 2007 10:36 pm

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I love shots that shine out of the darkness. This one works brilliantly!
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Postby Steffen on Sun Oct 14, 2007 10:40 pm

This is impressive! Very well done. Is that the modelling light on the flash head?

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Postby sheepie on Sun Oct 14, 2007 10:51 pm

Steffen wrote:This is impressive! Very well done. Is that the modelling light on the flash head?

I've actually fired off the lights myself - using the light sensor on them. I do like the effect that's been achieved :)
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Postby Reschsmooth on Sun Oct 14, 2007 10:52 pm

Awesome work, Leon. But more importantly, how was the coffee?
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Postby iluxa on Mon Oct 15, 2007 9:25 am

Very nice shot, Leon!

And btw because I cannot write to the "Announcements" section I will say it here.
Thank you very much for your hospitality, great coffee and framing workshop. Man, you are a legend!

And I also want to thank everyone from the MaxiMeet for a really great day.
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Postby Killakoala on Mon Oct 15, 2007 10:28 am

Leon, I was impressed when I first saw this image and I am still impressed now. The more I look at it the more I like about it. The lighting is just perfect.
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Postby ozimax on Mon Oct 15, 2007 1:01 pm

Next time Gary & Pa, would you kindly apply some talcum powder to those bald bonces to prevent the glare... :D

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