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Model Angelina - 1940s Inspired Xtina Look - Part 2

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Model Angelina - 1940s Inspired Xtina Look - Part 2

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu Nov 01, 2007 3:18 pm

Hey just to close out this set.....C & C appreciated and required lol


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Postby PiroStitch on Thu Nov 01, 2007 4:43 pm

The first set was much stronger in terms of lighting and final output.
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Postby devilla101 on Thu Nov 01, 2007 5:47 pm

Very sexy!

I like how your processed the first one and love the strong pose on the 3rd. Smokin'
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu Nov 01, 2007 9:45 pm

Thanks guys....i am really proud of the first one here, but i dont think it has grabbed as many as i thought....lol........i love it though....cheers :)

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Postby Pa on Thu Nov 01, 2007 10:15 pm

hi dan 2&3 are my picks of these.......all good though.


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Postby matt-chops on Fri Nov 02, 2007 1:17 am

Dan,

I'm with you on your thoughts of the first image. It is very striking. The colours and composition work beautifully. The skin tones are fantastic. It feels very alive.

IMHO though, on a totally non-photography related note, I don't know that the model's hair works that well. To me it just feels too messy for the image you were going for. Perhaps stronger, bolder curls with less messy fiddly bits would look more complete? Or maybe thats just me missing the point all together?
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Postby Biggzie on Fri Nov 02, 2007 1:10 pm

Cre8tivepixels wrote:Thanks guys....i am really proud of the first one here, but i dont think it has grabbed as many as i thought....lol..

Actually its my pick (just) .... but they are all excellent
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Postby jethro on Fri Nov 02, 2007 9:03 pm

Dan you now have your skintones smoklin! Your last few shoots have the skitones Elsupremo! Well done mate

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