Partial desaturation of Raw file image - does it 'work'?

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Partial desaturation of Raw file image - does it 'work'?

Postby Matty B on Sun Feb 13, 2005 8:58 pm

This image I painstakingly desaturated / masked in PS and re-toned the desaturated parts. I added a small frame to try to give more impact. Is it a EASY image to view or awkward to focus on? Like - Dislike?

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Postby jonnydee on Sun Feb 13, 2005 9:13 pm

I like it, the colours on the boat are muted enough that it doesn't stick out too much, but draws the eye in. Nice work! Might be a bit tricky, but have you thought about partially colouring the reflection/shadow of the boat on the water?
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Postby Matty B on Sun Feb 13, 2005 9:51 pm

Thanks for the comments jonnydee, The boat's owner's painted it in some great understated "boaty" colours. I'll go back to the original file and see what reflection I can save from the boat - a job for a rainy day when camera stays in it's case! :)
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Postby sirhc55 on Sun Feb 13, 2005 9:54 pm

Nicely done Matty B - the photo lends itself to being filtered as a pastel or even given a touch of gaussian blur to give it a dream like effect
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Postby ozimax on Sun Feb 13, 2005 9:58 pm

I like the effect, the colours aren't too much, but subtle, nicely done, Max
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Postby kurokaze204 on Sun Feb 13, 2005 11:05 pm

Now call me a down-home country boy, but this is the sort of photo I'd frame for my office.
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Postby BBJ on Sun Feb 13, 2005 11:11 pm

I like it the way it is looks good and also would look nice with a bit fog or mist off the water as well.
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Postby mudder on Mon Feb 14, 2005 1:36 pm

This really invokes a relaxed, calming feeling for me... Really like what appears like a soft-focus (or is it just me?) and the spiky grass spears(?) in the foreground...

That'd look great framed and up on the wall in the bar :-) Very nice... Very easy and soft on the eye...

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Postby Glen on Mon Feb 14, 2005 2:18 pm

Matty, I really like it and its dreamlike quality. Interetingly, proving that beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I think I would like it even more without the grass spears, unlike mudder who prefer them. I think they slightly throw ones focus from the boat.
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