Archerfield Drift shots

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Archerfield Drift shots

Postby Ghetto Panda on Sun Nov 11, 2007 5:25 pm

Just thought i'd post up some shots from a local drift comp i go too these are from the 26th of last month. All shot with my newly acquired 1.8 50mm the lighting is very hard being night time comps but it's fun.

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Postby zafra52 on Sun Nov 11, 2007 8:13 pm

They are all very nice pictures, but my favourite is number one. You must have been very close to the action to get those images with a 50 mm. lens
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Postby Big V on Sun Nov 11, 2007 9:02 pm

You should be pleased with these shots, given the lighting conditions, you have done very well.
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Postby Ghetto Panda on Sun Nov 11, 2007 9:23 pm

Yeah for once i am actually happy with these it was my first time using the 50mm and i'm very happy with it and zaf i'm only a couple of metres away from the action.
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Postby bwhinnen on Mon Nov 12, 2007 12:41 pm

Nice (game) work with the 50mm !
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Postby Shorty on Mon Nov 12, 2007 1:41 pm

I really like #3 followed by #1. Very well done!!

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Postby Pehpsi on Mon Nov 12, 2007 1:57 pm

Really like #3, great action shot. The white pops out nicely, good panning, perfect shutter..
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Postby !~DeViNe~DaRkNeSs~! on Mon Nov 12, 2007 7:15 pm

evening drifting is a pain in the butt, but of course the 50mm wins everytime :D
but seriously close u would have been, ur mad lol!
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Postby Ghetto Panda on Mon Nov 12, 2007 7:33 pm

!~DeViNe~DaRkNeSs~! wrote: ur mad lol!


Maybe a little lol.
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Postby Raskill on Mon Nov 12, 2007 8:30 pm

Nice mate, the 50mm wouldn't be used much for motorsports, but you've used it to perfection here. Uber sharp images, perfect shutter speed and great panning.

I think you need to play about a bit in PS though. The colours in 1 are just crying out to be pumped up. I've had a play (hope you don't mind) and by reducing the brightness a fair bit, pumping the contrast and saturation levels, you really get the golds/bronzes coming out. The blacks become better also, making the image pop. I can post it if you want. My laptop is calibrated, so the colours are pretty accurate.

Great shots though mate. Your images are coming along in leaps and bounds.
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Postby Ghetto Panda on Mon Nov 12, 2007 9:04 pm

Post it up Raskill would love to see it, i must admit i don't spend alot of time in pp with my shots not really that great with ps to be honest.
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Postby jamesw on Mon Nov 12, 2007 9:14 pm

yes they are dope dope dope shots, but could do with some contrast and saturation pumping...

i love the first 86 shot (the gold and black look awesome, and that blown light in the background gives the car a kind of halo) and the white silvia,
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Postby Raskill on Tue Nov 13, 2007 2:06 pm

Panda, heres what I've done to your images.

Just a reduction in brightness, and an increase in contrast (to get your whites whiters and blacks blacker) Then pumped up saturation.

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I was trying to get the gold light in the background and bronze on the car more saturated. You lose a bit of detail across the front of the vehicle, but nothing that really added to the picture. (IMHO).

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I was hoping to get the background darker in this, and the car whiter. I pumped the saturation to get the bright blue in the headlights to come out more.

If you don't like what I've done, let me know and I'll remove the links.

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Postby Ghetto Panda on Tue Nov 13, 2007 6:37 pm

Thanks Raskill for posting up your edited versions i'm very much liking the second edit really makes the white pop from the background. The second is a little dark but i do see where you are coming from it has definately gives the picture more depth and the colours do look alot better i might have a play around with the first one and see what i can come up with.
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