Melbourne Panorama at Dusk

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Melbourne Panorama at Dusk

Postby mikephotog on Mon Nov 12, 2007 2:04 pm

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Taken from Victoria Harbour/Docklands area at around 8:30pm.
Nikon D70, 28-80 zoom, Photomerge in PS CS3 using 8 separate images.
Camera mounted vertically for shoot.
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Postby Bindii on Mon Nov 12, 2007 3:49 pm

The light is lovely.. you have chosen a good time to shoot me thinks.. its a gorgeous image...

my only niggle is the mast of the boat appears to be cropped slightly off the top... I'd maybe think about cloing a little off the top of the mastand replacing it with sky... :)
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Postby Big V on Mon Nov 12, 2007 6:38 pm

There is a really nice combination of colour and lighting here. It really draws you in.
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Postby mikephotog on Tue Nov 13, 2007 12:29 pm

A couple of detail areas at 100%

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Postby big pix on Tue Nov 13, 2007 4:54 pm

....... you have done a nice job of this, and I do like the boat up front and personal on the right hand side........
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Postby the foto fanatic on Tue Nov 13, 2007 5:31 pm

Very nice pano
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Postby Bandit on Tue Nov 13, 2007 5:38 pm

Nice shot(s)
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Postby iluxa on Wed Nov 14, 2007 2:28 pm

Amazing!
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