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Weddings and Different Emotions

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Weddings and Different Emotions

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Nov 14, 2007 10:10 pm

Hey,

Just some of the emotions and a few candid shots (some posed as well) from my last few weddings....

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Postby Geoff on Wed Nov 14, 2007 10:15 pm

Dan - beautiful stuff mate.
Always makes it easier with a pretty bride, but the first shot is great - exposure, composition etc...very nice!
In the 2nd image - I find the white fleck (light??) above her left shoulder a bit distracting, I'd clone it out... and curve it up a bit so her left eye is a little lighter, but a classic shot none the less...
3rd image - great candid shot!!!
4th - Not sure about it, I see what you've gone for her but the sun wrecks the bouquet, that doesn't necessarily wreck the entire shot but my eyes are drawn to the son spot, which then makes me see that the flowers are well, kinda blown out.

Have the clients seen these? I'm sure they'd be happy.
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Postby Bindii on Wed Nov 14, 2007 10:54 pm

Stunning stuff as always Dan... That third shot is a cracker!.. what a lovely candid of them! My only niggle is the buildings in the last shot.. (quite like the sun flare btw).. they are crooked... I know that I would be tempted to straighten them.. :)
The last thing I want to do is hurt you... but it's still on the list... ;)
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Nov 14, 2007 11:12 pm

Thanks Geoff..........yes i will clone that out (i love the way you guys see things that i wouldn't dream of seeing) yup undecided about the last as well......Bindii thanks as well........yea i did straighten them up , now i can see more i required ........

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Postby shakey on Thu Nov 15, 2007 1:21 am

The photo of the little girl is lovely. Great expression. Nice shallow DOF with the right things in focus and lovely light on the ringlets in the hair. Also like the third shot. First one..nothing really wrong, but nothing really great. Last one...great concept with the low lying sun coming through the middle of the couple but having half of the CBD in the background doesn't work for me. Vertical crop just with the couple is how I'd frame it
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu Nov 15, 2007 1:34 am

shakey wrote:The photo of the little girl is lovely. Great expression. Nice shallow DOF with the right things in focus and lovely light on the ringlets in the hair. Also like the third shot. First one..nothing really wrong, but nothing really great. Last one...great concept with the low lying sun coming through the middle of the couple but having half of the CBD in the background doesn't work for me. Vertical crop just with the couple is how I'd frame it


thanks mate..........The last couple is a couple from Germany and they wanted the cityscape as a backdrop.... :)


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Postby shakey on Thu Nov 15, 2007 2:34 am

Cre8tivepixels wrote:thanks mate..........The last couple is a couple from Germany and they wanted the cityscape as a backdrop.... :)


Dan


That puts a different "perspective" on it then.. :) :)
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