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Postby iposiniditos on Tue Nov 20, 2007 12:23 pm

...would you choose?

dimitra (the model) ask me to choose
which one would be better for her book.

personally i prefer the #1, but i would
like your opinion.

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Postby dviv on Tue Nov 20, 2007 12:58 pm

Number 2 for me

I'm not a fan of the first one. The angle means you are looking up her nose.
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Postby Alex on Tue Nov 20, 2007 1:05 pm

No. 2 for me also. Both excellent portraits though.

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Postby Mal on Tue Nov 20, 2007 1:10 pm

I suppose it depends on what you are wanting to convey in the book. For me no1 shows a bit of secrecy, not knowing who the person really is. No. 2 shows a person that is fun and beautiful.
Personally I like seeing the face so it is number two for me as well.
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Postby PiroStitch on Tue Nov 20, 2007 2:59 pm

I don't mind the first shot but might be better with a tighter crop with less sky? I like the off centre composition though.
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Postby Mr Darcy on Tue Nov 20, 2007 3:06 pm

For a model portfolio, I would probably go with #1 though the skin seems a bit excessively smoothed

I prefer #2 as a portrait though. I get a sense of the person with it.
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Postby Handlebars on Tue Nov 20, 2007 9:56 pm

#1 for me, shows more emotion and tells more of a story
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Postby scottvd on Wed Nov 21, 2007 3:03 am

#1 for me - more abstract - #2 looks too posed?

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Postby Geoff on Wed Nov 21, 2007 6:12 am

No. 2 :)
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Postby iposiniditos on Wed Nov 21, 2007 9:59 am

thank you all!

more for #2, to be honest i would prefer more to be with #1 :oops: :D,
so i have to think more...
but... i don't know why.. i find #2 a little bit usual in a way.

thanks again for your help!
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu Nov 22, 2007 10:35 am

Number one for me dude great work :)
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Postby joet on Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:06 am

Theo,

My wife, Crisoula, says all Greeks are artistic and she prefers No. 1 :roll:

Good work (and I MUST share her opinion :oops: )
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:27 am

#2 is more of a snapshot

Now, #1 - excellent composition, ethereal in concept. Makes you look at it and imagine the thoughts going through the young ladies mind.

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Postby Big Red on Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:27 am

#1 for me too ... just like the pic better as i thing she is smiling too much in the second
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Postby blacknstormy on Thu Nov 22, 2007 11:31 am

#1 :)
Makes me want to know what she is looking at, and what she is thinking :)
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Postby Marvin on Thu Nov 22, 2007 12:24 pm

#1 for me too!
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Postby TC on Thu Nov 22, 2007 12:29 pm

#1 for me
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Postby Travy on Thu Nov 22, 2007 4:54 pm

I like number 1 more than number 2. both look good though
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Postby JeffGlue on Thu Nov 22, 2007 5:15 pm

I'd prefer #2 as well, not a big fan of the up the nose angle
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Postby zafra52 on Thu Nov 22, 2007 8:27 pm

Both pictures are good, but I think number 1 is slightly better.
I know it is all the rage, but I believe the skin treatment in this type of images is becoming so excessive that the models end up looking artificial.
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Postby who on Sun Nov 25, 2007 12:17 am

I would call #1.

I would like to see #1 but with maybe just the hint of a smile ideally?

Also I will 2nd the calls on a bit too much PP on the skin.... could you post a less touched up version at all?
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Postby iposiniditos on Sun Nov 25, 2007 12:52 am

thank you all for the comments and your help!

personally i prefer 100% less skin retouch, but if you want to make fashion work these days, it is the first thing that you have to do...
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Postby chrisk on Sun Nov 25, 2007 10:44 am

#1 for me.

not to give you a big head or anything, but you're my favourite photographer on this site. i love your work. look forward to every thread you put up. :) btw: the espresso video on your website ROCKS !

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Postby iposiniditos on Tue Nov 27, 2007 8:42 pm

many many thanks for your kind words :oops: :oops:

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Postby Viz on Tue Nov 27, 2007 9:38 pm

Yasu, #1 has more going one despite mention of nose-cam, I think #2 is too PS heavy. I would fade it back, maybe 10% toward the original image - so it is still 90% re-touch.
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Postby iposiniditos on Wed Dec 05, 2007 12:10 pm

many thanks viz for the suggestion
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