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Narcissism

Postby wendellt on Sun Aug 26, 2007 11:22 am

UCE mag gave us the theme Narcacism for a 4 page beauty editorial my stylist Angela and myself interpreted it as basically a girl washed up from shipwreck, contextual shipwreck clues around her letters, broken mirror, rope
before the final moments of death she is still obsessed with her beauty as a last action of vanity she picks up a mirror to check out her look instead of getting up and crying for help, hence narcissism

we shot at Bondi beach at 5:30am and our model Gemma was a real tough cookie twas cold and annoying laying back on a rock for an hour dressed in nothing but a nightgown

the following images are not in narative order, just the best looking ones

Image
this one has been photoshopped so it looks colder and more atmospheric

Image

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rest here:
http://www.zeduce.org/images/shoot/narcasism/narcasism.htm

Concept/Styling: Angela Wozniak @ TID
Model: Gemma @ Scene
Hair & Makeup: Jodi Gardner @ http://www.jodigardner.com

this is my last post for a while, i'm off to NYC
Last edited by wendellt on Sun Aug 26, 2007 12:37 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Postby PiroStitch on Sun Aug 26, 2007 11:47 am

Hi mate, love the theme and the interpretation.

Not sure whether you noticed, but in the third pic there's a fisherman. Might want to consider cloning him out if she's shipwrecked and by herself :)
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Postby Oz_Beachside on Sun Aug 26, 2007 11:52 am

Brilliant, absolutely world first class!!!

A brilliant collection of images representing the theme for the Greek Mythological figure of Narcissus.

You continue to demonstrate ever evolving inspiration work, thanks for sharing! :D
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Postby wendellt on Sun Aug 26, 2007 11:53 am

hi wayne

thanks bud

the fisherman is intentional as her last act she checks herself in the mirror to amek sure she still looks beautuiful she even adds an earing in on the shots instead of calling out for help, excessive obsession of self beauty
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Postby big pix on Sun Aug 26, 2007 12:40 pm

the fisherman shot is the standout for me....... the lighting, pose, contrast, not a lot to fault...... good work
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Postby Killakoala on Sun Aug 26, 2007 2:01 pm

They're great Wendell. Right from the concept to creation, they fit the theme perfectly. Something for me to aspire to. :)
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Postby Sandy Feet on Sun Aug 26, 2007 2:06 pm

Fantastic shots Wendell,
#2 for me the tones, lighting, everything

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Postby padey on Sun Aug 26, 2007 3:22 pm

Nice shots, and this type pf photography isn't really my forte` so take my C&C with a grain of salt.

With the first one, i know you have intently washed it out, I probably would have pulled the sky/cloud the other way and made that more dramatic while washing out the model/rock out.

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Postby zafra52 on Sun Aug 26, 2007 8:29 pm

My preference is for the one with the guy fishing. So as far as I am concerned, it simply has to go from the scene.

...the theme for the Greek Mythological figure of Narcissus.


Except that Narcissus was a man so let's call her Narcissa instead.
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Postby devilla101 on Mon Aug 27, 2007 7:34 pm

Yeah awesome shots there dude. Well interpreted
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Postby photograham on Tue Aug 28, 2007 3:42 pm

Wendell, congratulations on a great set of shots. I always wonder how these concepts come to fruition. And whilst my photoshop skills are continually improving, I would love to know, and I'm sure other would also, the basics behind the image reflections and how they were put together.
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Postby Pehpsi on Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:10 pm

Wowsers! 3rd shot is a ripper. So damn creative.
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Postby Hudo on Tue Aug 28, 2007 5:31 pm

Great work as always....

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Postby Stolky on Sat Nov 24, 2007 4:05 pm

She looks cold.

(...pun intended)




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p.s. nic work!
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Postby Stolky on Sat Nov 24, 2007 4:06 pm

edit: nice work!
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Postby ABG on Sat Nov 24, 2007 4:41 pm

Lovely work Wendell. I agree with Andrew re the lack of sky detail in the first shot, but you've nailed it in the rest.

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Postby Alex on Sat Nov 24, 2007 4:50 pm

Beautiful stuff, Wendell. Love the creativity!!

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Postby colin_12 on Sat Nov 24, 2007 7:07 pm

I love the lighting you have acheived in these Wendell.
As always nice to see your work.
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Postby blacknstormy on Sat Nov 24, 2007 7:29 pm

I missed these the first time around :? I'm glad Stolky found the again :)
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Postby marcotrov on Sun Nov 25, 2007 11:00 am

Photography technique aside, which is superlative, your interpretive skills and creative direction is equally impressive. Wonderful set of images Wendell. :)
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Postby Handlebars on Mon Nov 26, 2007 8:16 pm

#3 is great, very emotive
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Postby Willy wombat on Tue Nov 27, 2007 12:18 pm

Blown away (again). :D
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